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I'm naked on the page
Stretching out my unclothed body before you Painting my arms and legs in words Helpless and exposed Terrified and strangely exhilerated You've seen me, I cannot run There's no place left for me to hide I'm tied to the page unable to escape Please be kind and close your eyes So that I am able to flee Or undress yourself and let's have sex in the grass |
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Interesting write!
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kick *ss!!!
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Yay, positive feedback on the first post! I could get to like this forum:)
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Humm well if you can't escape you might as well have some fun good one and welcome to the site
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Yes welcome to the site and poetry section!
Allways room here for more talent!
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Wonderful delight...I agree..prose and poetry creates vulnerability..exposure..and to react to yours..I agree..tall grass...
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Very nice,,, Welcome
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Very creative....good first post...hope to see more creativity. Welcome to the site.
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Nice one.. welcome
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Hey 7Kate7... excellent write... lol. (but this isn't the first place she posted it, so ha everyone)
Ha what? who cares? Kate, this was a beautiful write... and I think that you'll find, unless you ask for heavy critique, most members are just here to enjoy... and, if they didn't like it, were raised, if you don't have something nice to say... Use an emoticon. J/k. Welcome to the site Kate... good to see you here, hope you enjoy. |
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 WOW, I felt THAT!!!,lol Nice job...
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