Topic: Drivel
FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 12:45 AM
I cannot tell my soul anymore, that what I have done is right.
I cannot convince myself in the darkness, that I'll be ok by the morning light.
My heart so slowly tears asunder, underneath this constant pain...
I cry so much when talking about it, that from these memories I refrain...
But tonight...
Tonight came to swiftly, for me to drown my woes,
and as the memories come calling back, the deeper my fear grows.
That, maybe I'll try to talk to her again...
maybe try to make her see...
how much she tears me apart inside, when she won't listen to me...
My breath falls short of any real relief, as it quickens in its' pace,
Worry lines crinkle across my brow, and tears stream down my face...
It's time that I let you go again... tho tonight, I may not know how,
I cannot keep my sanity, when you're here, like you are, with with me now.
A memory...
One that's more like an attack...
One that won't listen, that won't speak,
that won't take me back...
And it'd be so much easier, if you would just let me,
at least, be a memory.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/13/08 07:58 AM

I cannot tell my soul anymore, that what I have done is right.
I cannot convince myself in the darkness, that I'll be ok by the morning light.
My heart so slowly tears asunder, underneath this constant pain...
I cry so much when talking about it, that from these memories I refrain...
But tonight...
Tonight came to swiftly, for me to drown my woes,
and as the memories come calling back, the deeper my fear grows.
That, maybe I'll try to talk to her again...
maybe try to make her see...
how much she tears me apart inside, when she won't listen to me...
My breath falls short of any real relief, as it quickens in its' pace,
Worry lines crinkle across my brow, and tears stream down my face...
It's time that I let you go again... tho tonight, I may not know how,
I cannot keep my sanity, when you're here, like you are, with with me now.
A memory...
One that's more like an attack...
One that won't listen, that won't speak,
that won't take me back...
And it'd be so much easier, if you would just let me,
at least, be a memory.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild



Memories at times good or bad haunt our every core,,
Release the past, live for the future,, live for you
be happy,, time will ease the pain, yet the memory
shall remain

flowerforyou flowerforyou :cry:

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 02:03 PM
Deep words LaMom... Lol... leave it to you to respond to this post!
Love ya!

LAMom's photo
Thu 03/13/08 09:42 PM

Deep words LaMom... Lol... leave it to you to respond to this post!
Love ya!


As I you flowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Thu 03/13/08 11:33 PM


Deep words LaMom... Lol... leave it to you to respond to this post!
Love ya!


As I you flowerforyou

blushing blushing blushing :tongue:

jimz's photo
Fri 03/14/08 04:40 PM
smokin smokin smokin

Unsane's photo
Fri 03/14/08 05:04 PM
wow. great write. thank you.

FroznChild's photo
Fri 03/14/08 08:22 PM
Hey, no problem...
Glad that everyone enjoyed it!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 03/15/08 03:34 AM
flowerforyou smokin

s1owhand's photo
Sat 03/15/08 03:38 AM
bigsmile

no photo
Sat 03/15/08 07:53 AM
My friend you do amaze me with your words... BRAVO........drinker

brwnkimba's photo
Sat 03/15/08 02:01 PM

I cannot tell my soul anymore, that what I have done is right.
I cannot convince myself in the darkness, that I'll be ok by the morning light.
My heart so slowly tears asunder, underneath this constant pain...
I cry so much when talking about it, that from these memories I refrain...
But tonight...
Tonight came to swiftly, for me to drown my woes,
and as the memories come calling back, the deeper my fear grows.
That, maybe I'll try to talk to her again...
maybe try to make her see...
how much she tears me apart inside, when she won't listen to me...
My breath falls short of any real relief, as it quickens in its' pace,
Worry lines crinkle across my brow, and tears stream down my face...
It's time that I let you go again... tho tonight, I may not know how,
I cannot keep my sanity, when you're here, like you are, with with me now.
A memory...
One that's more like an attack...
One that won't listen, that won't speak,
that won't take me back...
And it'd be so much easier, if you would just let me,
at least, be a memory.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild



Fear is only a mask for curiosity to be shown when passionate about
something alluring.
Don't play with emotions of chaos, for despair is what you will be
procuring.
You FALL in love and STEP in lust, one is company to lies and
the other comes with trust.
Benign approaching what gift she brings, if only I new then
how much I would miss the song she sings.
What lesson could be more rigidly learned,
play with loves fire and you will get burned.

FroznChild's photo
Sat 03/15/08 08:37 PM
Excellent brwn, Fall in love and step in lust... I like that.
Vivid picture... and so true.
Rock on, keep em coming!

no photo
Sat 03/15/08 08:45 PM
you are amazing...

FroznChild's photo
Sat 03/15/08 08:52 PM

you are amazing...

ahh Noel... You are too sweet... Thank you.