Topic: lighthouse by sweetwater2 | |
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She stands there with strength and courage,a beauty for all to see,taking a life full of storm and turbulent seas, His ship is battered and pounded loosing hope fast, as sails crowsnest and masts come to crash, the waves relentless,all seems lost he prays to survive this turbulant tempest,but a what cost As he looks out to hope for shore, he sees her light,and opens the door,for the sea tonite will not settle its score, Like an angel with fire who lights the nite,giving him hope he will survive this fright, To him her beauty is totality unrivaled,she helped him through seas so uncontrolled and wild, As he guides his ship towards the shore, she offers her light forever more.
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that was beautiful and very moving brother!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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beautiful. I like it
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Edited by
Sweetwater2
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Tue 03/11/08 07:56 PM
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I see the light by the shore & hope it calms the high seas in him & never be broken for ever more...Sweetwater2
I'm not a poet but thought I might chime in there with ya! |
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Thank you!
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Tried to edit this
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Beautiful write, inspirring...
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Nice floating PLACE to share,,,THANKS,,
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Just beautiful
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I was inspired by romance when I wrote this one.
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Dude cool
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