“Walls Closing In”


Do you ever feel as if you’re on the edge?
And you stand alone on the ledge.
Wondering what will be next.
Life seems so perplexed.

It’s to the point you can’t take anymore.
You wonder what else is in store.
Will things ever come to and end.
How much farther can one bend?

It seems as if life is throwing you a curve ball.
It waits to see if you will fall.
And it seems as if everything goes wrong.
Could life be testing you to see how strong.

You are or will you finally give up after all.
And let all the walls crumble and fall.
No matter how much you shove.
You still don’t see the end of.

In the tunnel you look for the light.
But all you see is the night.
You keep searching for just a shadow.
But it doesn’t seem to allow.

Not even a glimmer to reach you.
But still you chose to pursue.
Even if at times you doubt.
It will happen you know you will claw your way out.

Fighting scratching what ever it takes.
We learn from our mistakes.
Knowing we will never stop.
Not now, for we are reaching to get to the top.

No matter how much time.
It takes for us to climb.
Even if it takes all night.
We will finally reach the light.


K.L.M
3/11/2008

Oh sistah! Yeah ... I know that feeling ...

Ohhhh hell ya at times we sit and wonder but then we know we must push ahead for we know we can't just give up.



johncarl

Toss the rope any time, babe. You're not as alone as you may think............Sing out, sweetie, doesn't matter if your in tune or not.

(((( Puddin Cup )))))

Yep, and you pulled me through,, Never alone my sweet sister
Wench and I will make sure of that,,,

Along with many, many others!!!!! You bet'cha!

You couldn't have possibly put this any better if you tried Kristi

Awww I know ya would all be there for me but at times there are things we must do alone. I'm not one to give up I will truly survive. No matter how hard life seems at times and the stress seems to overcome us we must never give up for there is a light at the end of the tunnel. We must never let the darkness take over. But.... at times there are things we must do ourselves to find that light just grap for it for it is there. Waiting to peak in.

Moving Txs... and wonderful flow.

Thank you very much for reading Hummm the light is starting to peak in

Very good write, as long as there is life there is hope. Thank you for sharing this one.

Yep- never give up!

Another good write (((Krisiti)))

Yes I agree, very good write, i know exactly how you feel, all that you expressed in your poem

She said it best for me to....


I live your poem Kristi, and procrastination has kept me climbling........WE are our WORST stumbling blocks...

Awww so true where there is life there is always hope.
We must always push forward no matter how dark the days
get we must remember there is light after the dar.