I generally hate these "look at my profile and rate me" threads, but I'm breaking my own rule I guess, and crying out for your attention. lol

I just completely re-wrote my profile... if you so please, have a look at it and tell me what you think, if I need to get rid of/add anything... tell me if I'm too ugly to be on this site... whatever you want... I can take it!

I like food, so sounds good to me. lol

lol who doesn't? food is the....... food... of life...

Looks good. You put out a lot of info and sounded very sincere. Good luck here at JSH!

Whoever invented food is a genius.

looks good

you have a good profile, kinda covers everything ....but...how do you cook cajun food in penn.??(i am a new orleans native)post a pic of the bike!!

Attention Whore!!!!


J/K

I actually just started there, so I'm still learning it... it's interesting how much stuff you can get through today's market... we get live Crawfish in and Gator Tail and rocky mountain oysters and frogs legs, and all sorts of stuff that aren't at all native to this area... we're the only restaurant in the area doing cajun food and are voted the favorite restaurant in Lancaster County... also, the owner's uncle is Chef Paul Prudhomme.

pic of the bike is located here (i'd just stick the picture in, but i'm not sure if it's an img code or html or what:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v46/FatboyOverthrow/Honda/home4.jpg

One of the best I have seen for someone your age.

Very good photos. The first is not my forst pick but it is provocitive profile even with the "scrub" so keep it. Take the center photo, enlage and crop the bottom just slightly even if you sacrifice part of the gutair you will look slimmer with out the shirt tail uneaven. If you play often have someone shoot a roll and watch for mike position dominateing your face. The third is the best but if you have another with that shirt with a little more light on your eyes Excellent. That would be a good one for a portrait if you replace photo's which is a good way to keep interest up.

Your text is excellent. Confidence may be a little low but acceptable given the recent break up. Sorry her loss. Don't play it over 9 months or you will sound like a big baby.

Being a guy you probably haven't heard the take off one accessory thing but that kind of applys to this profile. You come off as honest and really trying to put who you are out there but some of the explanations are not necessary and take away. Consider...

Delete 1st sentence; rewrites are a given on line.

Delete after "23" and currently update after birthdays.

Delete paragraph four; yea people lie but you are not one of them so no sense referenceing "bad apples" and spoiling peoples appetite.

Delete up to I like Goofy movies and name one or two; if the perfect gal likes Star Trek on a rainey afternoon she will still be you favorite brew so no sense stepping on toes.

Delete "but am not a super Stereotypical Christian" the last phrase says it nicely.

Last but not least consider stopping smoking "occasionally". Most people read that as a hedge for less than a pack a day but still gross to kiss. If it is something you can take away from your profile you will up your responses even more dramaticlly than looseing a few pounds.

You sound like a really nice guy...I would let you date my little sister. Good Luck Happy St.Pat's!

I like your profile. Its very interesting