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Topic: It doesn't matter.......
redmange420 Joined Wed 11/15/06 Posts: 2659	Sat 12/30/06 05:05 PM
How many times have I asked myself "WHY?" It doesn't matter cuz eventually I start to cry. How many times have I thought about doin somethin? It doesn't matter cuz I just end up doin nothin. How many thoughts of death echo through my brain? It doesn't matter cuz they'd just label me as insane. How many people do I think that I can help today? It doesn't matter cuz it doesn't take the pain away. How many people point and laugh and try to ridicule me? It doesn't matter cuz those stupid people never rule me. How many times will I make changes in my life? It doesn't matter cuz its just a pointless sacrifice. How many times will I want to take a green bud hit? It doesn't matter cuz you're still a f*ckin lunatic. How many people are trapped up inside my head? It doesn't matter cuz eventually they'll all be dead. How many drugs will help me keep my sanity intact? It doesn't matter cuz the future's painted all black.

catchme_ifucan Joined Fri 11/03/06 Posts: 24221	Sat 12/30/06 05:09 PM
WOW!! Red!! you ok!!

Dreamweaverangel Joined Thu 11/30/06 Posts: 823	Sat 12/30/06 05:12 PM
WOW...That is a great poem!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!

redmange420 Joined Wed 11/15/06 Posts: 2659	Sat 12/30/06 05:19 PM
Yeah, I'm okay. Just babblin on........ ya know? Random thoughts runnin wild.

redmange420 Joined Wed 11/15/06 Posts: 2659	Sat 12/30/06 05:26 PM
This is to be in the sense of two personalities goin at it inside the same person.

greeneyedlady42 Joined Wed 07/26/06 Posts: 975	Sat 12/30/06 06:36 PM
Good writing "red"- I must say I have felt angst much similar to yours. You capture it well in words.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Sat 12/30/06 07:21 PM
Very good one!

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Sat 12/30/06 08:40 PM
good one cuz!!!

redmange420 Joined Wed 11/15/06 Posts: 2659	Sat 12/30/06 11:28 PM
Thank you, thank you!! Just tryin to vent a little, since I have no zanex!! LOL :)

redmange420 Joined Wed 11/15/06 Posts: 2659	Sun 12/31/06 12:17 AM
Next one will be called Tarantula!!! LOL

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Sun 12/31/06 12:22 AM
Wow Red..I like!! kick ass words!!

redmange420 Joined Wed 11/15/06 Posts: 2659	Sun 12/31/06 12:24 AM
muchos gracias mi amiga!! and stuff!! huh huh huh huh!! Sorry for the beavis and butthead!! LOL

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Sun 12/31/06 12:26 AM
LOL I love Beavis and Butthead!! Was that Dad in the last pic??

redmange420 Joined Wed 11/15/06 Posts: 2659	Sun 12/31/06 12:30 AM
Yeah. I decided to take it down, cuz I dont know if he wants me wavin him all around the internet!!! LMAO!!!

redmange420 Joined Wed 11/15/06 Posts: 2659	Sun 12/31/06 12:31 AM
This is my Buddy! :) Never been a better dog, for me anyways.

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Sun 12/31/06 12:32 AM
roflmao somehow I don't see Dad gettin all pissy cuz you put his pic up lol love the dog pic tho

redmange420 Joined Wed 11/15/06 Posts: 2659	Sun 12/31/06 12:34 AM
I DUNNO?! If he didn't take his thyroid medicine before he saw it..................... LMAO!!!!

mimi420 Joined Thu 11/30/06 Posts: 453	Mon 01/01/07 01:41 AM
Well spoke Red, love it.

jerbear1966 Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 931	Mon 01/01/07 04:31 PM
Nicely worded Redman, I can relate!

Pinkangel Joined Sat 11/25/06 Posts: 65	Mon 01/01/07 04:43 PM
what a downer for new years! what is wrong with you, red ? smile...it's a new year, ahead of you! that is a good poem, but way way way tooooooooooooo sad!