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by a weather gray and damp quietly surrounding me my nose pressed up against a window winter cold while echoes of you linger warm desires unfold as I shiver my skin stung and bruised with orchid kisses birthed in a sultry night ... I count the hours as white flowers fall from the sky briefly kissing the ground ... time slowly moves on ... I hear the sound of an excruciating reminder tick tock ... tick tock ... Silvered mercury trickles from dampened green with a whisper soft murmur asking loves known yet unseen when will I see you again.....? |
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encased by a weather gray and damp quietly surrounding me my nose pressed up against a window winter cold while echoes of you linger warm desires unfold as I shiver my skin stung and bruised with orchid kisses birthed in a sultry night ... I count the hours as white flowers fall from the sky briefly kissing the ground ... time slowly moves on ... I hear the sound of an excruciating reminder tick tock ... tick tock ... Silvered mercury trickles from dampened green with a whisper soft murmur asking loves known yet unseen when will I see you again.....? Breath taking My Angel,,, Pure Bliss ![]() ![]() |
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encased by a weather gray and damp quietly surrounding me my nose pressed up against a window winter cold while echoes of you linger warm desires unfold as I shiver my skin stung and bruised with orchid kisses birthed in a sultry night ... I count the hours as white flowers fall from the sky briefly kissing the ground ... time slowly moves on ... I hear the sound of an excruciating reminder tick tock ... tick tock ... Silvered mercury trickles from dampened green with a whisper soft murmur asking loves known yet unseen when will I see you again.....? Breath taking My Angel,,, Pure Bliss ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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as white flowers
I almost want to see snow fall........... Great imagery in this poem Ms Wiz
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Awesome my loviness, truly touching
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as white flowers
I almost want to see snow fall........... Great imagery in this poem Ms Wiz
fall from the sky Thank you Bonny...it was a bit difficult particularly as I'm in Arizona and trust me...there is NO snow here..... ![]() |
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Awesome my loviness, truly touching ![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you my sister....xoxoxooxoxox ![]() ![]() |
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Hello
![]() ![]() Plenty of snow here Ms. ![]() |
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oh yeah, so good, read it once, and I almost memorized it
peace out jimmy |
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Hello ![]() ![]() Plenty of snow here Ms. ![]() Heeeeey kid!!! How are you?? ![]() ![]() |
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oh yeah, so good, read it once, and I almost memorized it peace out jimmy Thank you so much jimmy...you're always so sweet~ ![]() ![]() |
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Nice
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Nice ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Very well done...vivid and emotional...
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Very well done...vivid and emotional... Thank you Wyatt....I had my emotional felt pens out for this one.... |
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When my darkness unfolds and
brings the leaves down upon your feet. When all thats green yields to death. You shall feel my soft kisses of frozen mist. Great read and some thoughts added,lol ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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When my darkness unfolds and brings the leaves down upon your feet. When all thats green yields to death. You shall feel my soft kisses of frozen mist. Great read and some thoughts added,lol ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you.... ![]() |
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You always seen to grab the attention from my heart. Very nice write.
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You always seen to grab the attention from my heart. Very nice write. ![]() ![]() Thank you Faded, I liked this piece as well...and I dont like everything I write.... ![]() ![]() |
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You're very welcome hun. Like someone told me once, even if ya don't like it, post it anyway and you'd be surprised what someone can take from it.
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