Broken Goodbye

Torn asunder
And broken in two,
The spirit unmends
As wounds come unglued.
The heart shattered silent
Without so much as a sound,
A love lies there bleeding
upon tainted, dead ground.
The body so lifeless
Though shocked to it's core,
The bars have been lowered
And locked is the door.
Killed is a friendship
Once respected in trust,
Smashed into powder
And mixed with the dust.
Raised once again,
The beast of great lies,
And pierces the spirit.
Unheard are it's cries.
Fading to darkness,
If only to mend,
A new beginning of old pain
That refuses to end.

Fadedspirit 3/6/2008

The door is never locked there is always hope,nice write

Thanks pkh.

Hope will lead the way ... Believe

dude, I don't know if it's just me, but you're writing which I always like, is going much deeper, you're digging deep where treasures are

peace out
jimmy

Thanks shauna.

Thanks for reading LAMom.

jimz, I've been in a sorta deep mood lately and don't understand why, but you are right about that. Thanks for noticing bro.