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Raven's Call
I've cast you away And yet you remain, What do you wish, You can't take my pain. You stand there and stare With cold knowing eyes, Yet you say nothing And I hold no surprise. If you're waiting for something, Please tell me or leave, Let me alone Or your spirit will grieve. Don't pretend that you know me, For I am not dead, I know you're not here For the tears I've unshed. Oh bird of the shadows Why cling you to me? I am part spirit Though I cease to yet be. You cannot take me Where spirits will roam, I am not willing, So I bid you to go! Your scream taunts my anger, Your laugh hurts my ear, You're awaking my dragon, Still you've no fear. The twilight upon us As the sun fades from sky, You are still here And I am wondering why. My dragon awakes, Speaking peace to my rage, Then whispers to me, "Spirit, please listen in haste." From out of the darkness Where rage is subdued I quietly listen As whispers speak truth. Awakened in dream So vivid and real, A whisper speaks out and it's power I feel. I'm beckoned to circle Where elders now stand, They welcome me in And lead me by hand. I see visions untold As the bird changes form, Now tears leave my eyes As I am reborn. Fadedspirit 3/6/2008 |
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umm do i hear alittle anger in that poem? was that directed towards someone?
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While anger is part of the story, it was not directed toward anyone.
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i liked it
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Thanks bgeorge, I'm glad you liked it.
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Re-Born, Wiser, Humbler, Prouder,, A gem in Disguise,,,
Beautiful Breath Taking Beautiful |
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Awww, thanks LAMom. You always seem to bring a smile.
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Awww, thanks shauna.
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