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Topic: Love me, Please?
FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/06/08 03:10 AM
Love me Please Beguiling her lips, to turn up, ...In a smile! With the quickly turned use of an apt phrase... I stalked her eyes as they turned my way, Then captured them in my gaze! Here I am! ... Said I, All 104 pounds! You don't have to laugh, I know how it sounds! But I'm truly a romantic ... where should I start? A bottle of wine for the picnic tonight? The poetry I read will pull strings in your heart, While the glasses I wear reflect candle light. As the days grow and grow, till that special one comes, When I ask you to be my wife! At the wedding, your side will be bursting with friends! I've lived with my Mom all my life... But I'll build robot arms! Big! and Strong! To carry you across my door. And with my Vast and Mighty brain, You'll Never ask for anymore! You'll be content! You'll feel alive! The condoms, she said... Are on isle five. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

cenasgirl91 Joined Fri 12/21/07 Posts: 309	Thu 03/06/08 03:13 AM
Love me Please Beguiling her lips, to turn up, ...In a smile! With the quickly turned use of an apt phrase... I stalked her eyes as they turned my way, Then captured them in my gaze! Here I am! ... Said I, All 104 pounds! You don't have to laugh, I know how it sounds! But I'm truly a romantic ... where should I start? A bottle of wine for the picnic tonight? The poetry I read will pull strings in your heart, While the glasses I wear reflect candle light. As the days grow and grow, till that special one comes, When I ask you to be my wife! At the wedding, your side will be bursting with friends! I've lived with my Mom all my life... But I'll build robot arms! Big! and Strong! To carry you across my door. And with my Vast and Mighty brain, You'll Never ask for anymore! You'll be content! You'll feel alive! The condoms, she said... Are on isle five. With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

kiki33 Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 29	Thu 03/06/08 03:14 AM


2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/06/08 03:58 AM
Good one Frozn, with a comical twist..

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Thu 03/06/08 05:06 AM


FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/06/08 05:09 AM
ahh... flowers for me? thank you noel

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Thu 03/06/08 05:09 AM
ahh... flowers for me? thank you noel anytime sweets

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/06/08 05:16 AM
I also wanna thank Cenas... always there to give me a flower. kiki33, thank you for the cheers, 2Btrue2One, glad I could make you smile today, and ya'll catch that? Noel called me sweets!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/06/08 05:18 AM
yeah, I caught it, you lucky man you...

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/06/08 05:21 AM
yeah, I caught it, you lucky man you... lmao... Any plans today 2B?

justmenoel Joined Thu 08/02/07 Posts: 3137	Thu 03/06/08 05:23 AM
I also wanna thank Cenas... always there to give me a flower. kiki33, thank you for the cheers, 2Btrue2One, glad I could make you smile today, and ya'll catch that? Noel called me sweets!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/06/08 05:25 AM Edited by 2Btrue2One on Thu 03/06/08 05:25 AM
yeah, I caught it, you lucky man you... lmao... Any plans today 2B? Not to many, have some time off, maybe i'll just hang out for a little while..

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 03/06/08 05:30 AM
yeah, I caught it, you lucky man you... lmao... Any plans today 2B? Not to many, have some time off, maybe i'll just hang out for a little while.. It's always good to see you... I think everyone else would concur! You're like Kellogs... you start the morning off right.

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/06/08 05:32 AM
yeah, I caught it, you lucky man you... lmao... Any plans today 2B? Not to many, have some time off, maybe i'll just hang out for a little while.. It's always good to see you... I think everyone else would concur! You're like Kellogs... you start the morning off right. Well I don't know about everyone, but thanks for the though of it anyway..

rgc75 Joined Thu 07/12/07 Posts: 23	Thu 03/06/08 12:35 PM
Nicely written man.

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Thu 03/06/08 12:44 PM Edited by Noden on Thu 03/06/08 12:45 PM
yeah, I caught it, you lucky man you... lmao... Any plans today 2B? Not to many, have some time off, maybe i'll just hang out for a little while.. It's always good to see you... I think everyone else would concur! You're like Kellogs... you start the morning off right. About ((2B))... Your right on that one, "You're like Kellogs... you start the morning off right." FrnChild Nice beautiful write btw, FznC I love how it ended as well; plus with, the "did y'all see that", well I seen it too... niceeeee!!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Fri 03/07/08 01:48 AM
Lol.... Thank you Noden, for taking the time to say so... Also, RGC, Thanks so much... Glad you liked it... (even more glad that you said so, lol) Thanks everyone... keep writing and reading.