Topic: Killing Love
Dreamweaverangel's photo
Wed 12/27/06 10:49 PM
Wed 12/27/06 09:55 PM
Killing Love

I was going on...
Doing just fine,
When off went my step,
And ca-put went my mind.

I did not mean to do it...
Really, had. not a clue...
It happened when I least expected it...
When I fell in love, with you.

It hurts to love
And no love returns...
What can I do,
When love's bleeding burns

I give and give love,
And then, give, once more...
All, broken loses,
As wings get tore.

Blood and water,
Surrounded by tears...
Wash away this pain...
And the past years.

I drink the drink
Of love's pure light////
Are you ''the one''...
I know, it's right!

Blood and water
By the river's shore,
Good bye my Lover,
For, I am no more!

Gryphyn's photo
Wed 12/27/06 10:55 PM
Such a sad story, death of a dream is hard anytime.

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Wed 12/27/06 10:57 PM
DEATH at times, is the better choice.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Wed 12/27/06 11:10 PM
At deaths door
it beckons and calls
my name i hear
it's written on the walls
I could fight it
tooth and nail
but this pain I feel
i can no longer bear
I'll give in to
the demons
I'm too weak to fight
bleeding and open
a gut wrenching sight
I no longer want to fight
Death is upon me
I take my last breath
love is lost
and this is my host
satan grabs me and takes me under to hells door
then I finally ponder
what the ****,
I dont want to die
rise up and fight
get to the light
Up out of the ashes I rise
Mighty and strong
the power was within me all along
I just needed
someone to believe'just to see
me for me
Life is worth living
till my dying breath
I'll find love again
and make it worth
the hurt

michael1313's photo
Thu 12/28/06 01:10 AM
two powerful and moving poems...good work girls!!!

Dreamweaverangel's photo
Thu 12/28/06 03:34 PM
TY, Michael! Sweet...I LOVE that poem, a LOT !!!!

no photo
Thu 12/28/06 04:07 PM
awsome