Topic: The R-word
starryeyed346's photo
Wed 03/05/08 08:21 AM
The hold you have on my heart
Is too strong for me to bear
You are too often in my mind
A way out… I will find.
A key to undo this lock you imprison me with…
I will find it.
but I see darkness
and I feel caged.
Suffocating…
While you're escaping
Did I make it too easy?
Did you even have to try?
Was it easy to please me?
To wipe the tears I cried?
Did you know exactly what to say
To make everything okay?
Scared out of my mind.
I have nothing left inside.
You don't even deserve a goodbye
Because you are no friend of mine.

lonedaddy's photo
Wed 03/05/08 08:25 AM
wow....:cry: :cry: :cry:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 03/05/08 08:52 AM
frown flowerforyou

starryeyed346's photo
Wed 03/05/08 11:27 AM
thank you... I dont let others read my poems or songs... I thought I'd put myself on a limb and get some feedback