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Edited by
sasfire75
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Tue 03/04/08 08:56 PM
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ok this aint all that great but thought I would share it with you...Just dont be too brutal to me but give me some feed back please..
As I walk through the shadows of doubt,my heart is full of nothing but doubt but I am sometimes to bullheaded and head strong to listen to my heart.For my heart tells me to just give up but,tonight i am too bullheaded to do just that.For I know my man one day will come out of hiding just for me.My man will have to have the biggest heart cant you see.For all the love I have to give him just from me. Then and there he will know with out no doubt,just what he truely means to me.. By Shannon (A.K.A. SASFIRE75) |
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Awesome (((Sas)))
You will find him someday. 
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Yeah you will find him someday and i hope i will find mine also.....
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Awesome (((Sas))) You will find him someday.
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Yeah you will find him someday and i hope i will find mine also.....
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Very nice sweetie, and you will find the one! Dont ever lose faith!
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Very nice sweetie, and you will find the one! Dont ever lose faith! |
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Good words , just a little jumbled I thought. Tell me what you think of it like this?
~Den As I walk through the Shadows of Doubt My heart is full of nothing but doubt But I am sometimes too bullheaded and Head strong to listen to my heart For my heart tells me To just give up, but,tonight I am too Bullheaded to do just that! For I know my man one day will come out of hiding,just for me My man will have to have the biggest heart cant you see. For all the the love I have to give him he has only yet to see Then and there he will know with out a doubt,just what he truly means to me.. |
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Good words , just a little jumbled I thought. Tell me what you think of it like this?
~Den As I walk through the Shadows of Doubt My heart is full of nothing but doubt But I am sometimes too bullheaded and Head strong to listen to my heart For my heart tells me To just give up, but,tonight I am too Bullheaded to do just that! For I know my man one day will come out of hiding,just for me My man will have to have the biggest heart cant you see. For all the the love I have to give him he has only yet to see Then and there he will know with out a doubt,just what he truly means to me.. |
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My pleasure
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Ty Teddy
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Wonderful poem... I think that Den is right, on needing just a little bit of a polish there,
but great to read something like this from you. If you end up with it, or, when you're satisfied, I'd like to see it again! |
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Ty frozn I will try to fix it up soon and repost it and see how you like it then
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I think it's beautiful.. when things such as this come from the heart, there is no wrong...
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I think it's beautiful.. when things such as this come from the heart, there is no wrong...
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I think it's beautiful.. when things such as this come from the heart, there is no wrong...
You are very welcome sas..
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