Thinker

How long will you give
And how long will you try,
How long will one feel
So empty inside?

When will the winds
Stop blowing in life
And how does one know
when all has been tried?

How will you know
When forever is gone
And why do most think
These questions are wrong?

A thinker must ask
Some questions in life
And seek out the aswers
Till they feel what's right.

Others ignore the questions they ask,
Once they're forgotten,
Thinkers resume their own task.

Maybe they're watchers
And seekers of life,
Seeking to end
What burns as their strife.

Maybe their meaning goes deeper than thought
And maybe you crossed them
Or once took a shot.

They've been labeled as morbid
And bitter at times,
They're often made fun of
But what is their crime?

Maybe it's you that has something to hide
As you enrage these monsters of mind.

Maybe you never
Gave them a chance,
Maybe you judged them
Just from a glance.

One thing is true,
We're all human at best,
And most thinkers believe
That humanity is a test.

Fadedspirit 3/4/2008

Faded...you are very talented...I'd like to see you take on the challenge of free verse.....here's a topic "Confusion"...are you up for the challenge my friend? <<slipping her devils horns on>>

Ahh MsWizard, you make my heart smile. How's this one?

A wonder of blunder
What have I done wrong,
Where are the words
And where have they gone?
My thoughts form tornados
That jumble the lines,
Uprooting my worlds
Yet undamaged is time.
I think that I know
But I don't know what I think,
Maybe disaster,
But I'm on a brink.
Drifting off in colors
As the poison now decayed,
Drifting off to never,
Please don't take me away.

So talented!

I agree very talented

Thanks pkh.

both were told rather well.

from your number 1 fan x

Thanks FroznChild.

Awww, thanks shauna.

artist-F.S.

Thanks jimz....not sure about being an artist but thanks for the compliment. Glad you liked it.