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i would like some feedback on my profile
any and all are welcome thankyou for your time me |
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I say clean the Jeep
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needs some work fella
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Spell and grammar check are required, I honestly could not get past that to even read the content. The one photo you have of yourself is very hard to see, and you look mad.
Write for the readers, and spelling does matter in here. All you have are your words, and they should be spelled correctly. All in all, I think you are trying very hard to be sincere. I know my feedback is harsh, but it's honest. Good luck to you. ![]() |
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Well I have NO idea what a "femal" is ....
but I'd have to agree. Use spell check .. and for goodness sake ... ((((((((((( SMILE )))))))))))) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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