Topic: A Man (girl's will like this)
FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 12:14 PM
A Man

I have not seen the sun today,
Nor felt it's warmth upon my face.
The travels I've traveled have been hard as the stone,
It's funny how life puts a man in his place.

A man's born a baby, that never will cry,
Has a serious look that says do or die.
Responds with a smile to mom's lullaby...
Then sighs.

Now five or six years down the road,
That boy's now stuck in loco mode,
He'll make you smile, laugh, cringe with so much love...
And the proudest realization,
Is that no matter what the expectation,
Even if he falls he'll rise above.

Then about ten or eleven, a man has reached his prime,
And he knows the things you need to know to get ahead.
Then he takes this knowledge and applies it,
A man always tries it,
And he's damn lucky if he doesn't wind up dead.

After that, it's all down hill,
As the picture will finally fill,
He is now an opinionated, hard headed, full fledged man.
He can get the job done, though it may cost him a thumb,
But if someone needs to do it... well, he can.

You're lucky to get a kiss, his lips you'll always miss,
What ever time he has is always his.
And he spends that with some toy,
After all, he's just a boy,
And that's what makes a man just what he is.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

cenasgirl91's photo
Tue 03/04/08 12:20 PM
All your poems are always interesting:smile:

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 12:25 PM

All your poems are always interesting:smile:

ahhh Cenas... you're just saying that to make me swoon...

pkh's photo
Tue 03/04/08 12:39 PM
flowerforyou a man and his toys,I think it's fine if a man cries...nice write

sasfire75's photo
Tue 03/04/08 01:09 PM
You hit that on the dot there...All the men I been with rather have there time to themselfs and not with there lady love...That is where some men go wrong...lolflowerforyou nice write again

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/04/08 01:15 PM
Awwww sweet write but what women need to learn is a man must have his toys and his time to play just as we do. Believe me it is much better having to share your man with his toys then another. :wink: laugh good one againbigsmile

silverwaya's photo
Tue 03/04/08 01:41 PM
TRULY A WONDERFUL DESCRIPTION OF WHAT A MAN IS

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 03:40 PM

flowerforyou a man and his toys,I think it's fine if a man cries...nice write

Hey... I'll cry on occasion... like to be in touch with my femenine side...
Thanks, Pkh... sad

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 03:41 PM

You hit that on the dot there...All the men I been with rather have there time to themselfs and not with there lady love...That is where some men go wrong...lolflowerforyou nice write again

Hit that on the dot... (like the sound of that)
(hopefully, some men will read this post) lol.

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 03:43 PM

Awwww sweet write but what women need to learn is a man must have his toys and his time to play just as we do. Believe me it is much better having to share your man with his toys then another. :wink: laugh good one againbigsmile

Lmao... love that second line Txsgal, (to true, to true)
Thanks...

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 03:44 PM

TRULY A WONDERFUL DESCRIPTION OF WHAT A MAN IS


These words really touched me silverwaya...
thanks so much.flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 03/04/08 04:54 PM
:smile:

FroznChild's photo
Sun 03/09/08 07:21 AM

:smile:

Oooh... Thank you Miss Teddy... You always seem to sneak in somewhere.