Topic: A Jilted Lover
FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 12:11 PM
A Jilted Lover

The flowers are a lovely shade this spring,
Almost the color of a butterfly's wing.
And the clouds are a pale, fluffy white,
Lost in the pink of that little girl's kite.
And your eyes are like pools in a meadow,
With an effervescent glow.
And the skin of that new born baby,
Is whiter than the snow.
But you are blind to all the colors,
Your heart has turned coal black.
To all the beauty of the world,
On which you've turned your back.
It seems to me, that when we were kids,
And time would pass swiftly by.
That it was on those hot, starry nights,
When your heart first started to die.
It was then that the colors first started,
To turn to that desolate gray.
And it broke my heart to hear your sigh,
As your colors floated away.
Think of all the love lost,
As we slowly drifted apart.
You, to your world of darkness,
Me, to a broken heart.
But you couldn't hold onto your colors,
In the midst of all your fears.
And your world slowly tumbled around you,
As you wept your silent tears.
If only you had tried harder,
You might still love me today.
But you gave up and ran,
You let your colors fade away.
These are the words she said to me,
These words that were so unkind...
Isn't it funny, that in this world of color,
She was the one born blind?

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent
man my hands are cold today... can hardly type...
anybody got some kinda hand warmers?
(and I'm not talking about my own hot air)

cenasgirl91's photo
Tue 03/04/08 12:17 PM
thats a good poem :smile:

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 12:21 PM

thats a good poem :smile:

Lol... well thank you Cenas... wish my hands were working better.
Always a pleasure to hear from you.

sasfire75's photo
Tue 03/04/08 01:16 PM
very nice poem...

pkh's photo
Tue 03/04/08 01:18 PM
beautifully written

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/04/08 01:20 PM
Wow that was awesome as you watch the colors fade and
blindness takes over so sad that some just want open
there eyes and see what is in front of them. bigsmile

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 03:27 PM
Thank you Sasfire... one on me drinker
Pkh... a flower for you flowerforyou
and TxsGal... you cool by me smokin

As always, I really appreciate the responses...
Mucho Gracious...

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 03/04/08 04:58 PM
Very good writtings... flowerforyou

PATSFAN's photo
Tue 03/04/08 04:59 PM
glasses drinker

FroznChild's photo
Tue 03/04/08 11:48 PM
Good to see you Miss Teddy... :tongue:
and PatsFan... You know I'm down with the irish!
Thanks everyone!