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oh unusual day for inside to stay and out of doors the snows fall hard and oh unusual day stranger that arrives this party for i have found respite in warm cups delight and soothe my view and hearken to this unusual day i will not venture out the snow falls throughout the winter land where cold ice stands upon tree and fence for another sip accompanied by a bit of tea time snack while i unpack oh unusual day --- |
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good job bro
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very nice
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you make my heart sing every time i read what you've written!
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nice job
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I really like your "unusual", or unique, ryhming structure...
Beautiful picture... FroznChild |
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