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Topic: The Longing Unending!
mach25 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 2509	Wed 02/27/08 07:09 PM
The longing in my heart is not because I lost at love! The longing in my heart, when did it start? The longing in my heart, was it the day you were gone? The longing in my heart, when will it leave me alone? The longing in my heart, can I find it again, the love I had? The longing in my heart, one I pray, out come the sun and away with the rain! Mach

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 02/27/08 07:10 PM
good job

1956deluxe Joined Thu 12/06/07 Posts: 8559	Wed 02/27/08 07:11 PM


PATSFAN Joined Mon 12/10/07 Posts: 42782	Wed 02/27/08 07:12 PM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 02/27/08 07:18 PM
Hi Mach

jhitchco Joined Sun 09/02/07 Posts: 463	Wed 02/27/08 07:21 PM


mach25 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 2509	Wed 02/27/08 08:07 PM
Hi Mach howdy doll! I suck at poetry but I tried lol

TwilightsTwin Joined Tue 04/10/07 Posts: 11054	Wed 02/27/08 09:16 PM
The longing in my heart, tells me to do things I don't want to do. Good poem amigo

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Thu 02/28/08 07:00 AM
Just write from the heart bro

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 02/28/08 07:02 AM
very nice,and true

mach25 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 2509	Fri 02/29/08 07:11 PM
The longing in my heart, tells me to do things I don't want to do. Good poem amigo like what things?? lmao

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