Topic: ghost ships 2
michael1313's photo
Sat 12/23/06 04:24 PM
Quietly I contemplate on my worries of yesterday,
silently Writing down, dream tolls I have yet to pay,
this price is high to search dream sky,sweetest price today,
loney weep no longer sleep,only fearing for my dreams,
quietly I contemplate,hoping not to complicate,
writing of my ghost ships,passing thru this Knight it seems...

Ghost ship of the night,your in my sleepless dreams,
please take my lonely heart,in poetic heartfelt reams,
fly this one into your sky,over mountains flying by,
Ghost ship on a cloudy day,show me your forgotten way,
send us on a dreamy wind,to live and love another day...

Quietly I contemplate,each and every passing day,
silently I write with rhyme,just to give my heart away,
some days are full,shadows,doubt,feeling left out,
some way no wind for sail,quiet ride,slowly fail,
Ghost ship of my dreamless night,no winds in sail,
silently we sit,just thinking of th' past,
hoping for the times,we have sweet winds at last....

this soft hope,you have sent from Thee,
puts wind in the sails,my ghost ship and me,
quietly I contemplate,the saddest days of late,
remembering to love all and not to ever hate,
you give me hope of finding my one true love,
you must be that Angel,asked for from above,
trying to live,learning how to cope,
feeling for a love,loving in your hope,

lead me not into hurt and pain,
my heart cannot go thru it again,
put hopes wind upon my sail,
hopes and prayers,love's not frail,
ghost ship please take flight,
fly high into this Knight,
learn my love,feel it right,
ghost ship sail into the night,
may our love feel no fright,
pray our heart gets it right.......Lonely Soul

escapedlunatic's photo
Sat 12/23/06 04:30 PM
Vry nicely done M...
At a loss for words here lately....
good work.

Cybear's photo
Sat 12/23/06 11:39 PM
Superb!!writing once again michael.I actually gave your poem a second
read because I caught myself reading it at the pace of an novel.But I
slowed down the pace on the second read and it was a fantastic example
of the depth of true love and the courage one must possess to endure and
fend off the pain endured as a result of the relationship.Saddening but
beautiful michael.Godspeed!Cybear

michael1313's photo
Sun 12/24/06 01:13 AM
thanx,,,this is a build up of my life up to date...
not just one expierence....M.

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/20/07 08:28 AM
bumping up for a friend...

LAMom's photo
Sat 01/20/07 09:33 AM
Awesome!!!!!!!

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/20/07 10:45 AM
thanx...
dusted this one off for a friend to read and here is one now...

how y'all???

tell Terry Hey for me...

LAMom's photo
Sat 01/20/07 10:47 AM
I will he asked about you last night,,,
said hope all is well with ya,, will be on soon!!!!

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/20/07 11:25 AM
oh yea!!!
I'm doing good!!!

I'm into my poetry almost full time now...
tell him to keep th shiny side up and th rubber side down...

and stop when he gets tired!!!