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Its tough when you feel used.
a stab to the heart times two. we try to change who we are why should we have to try this hard? but in this world thats growing warmer we find that love is getting colder. mischevious, malicious, uninformed and its not over till hearts are torn. and with all these fish that are in the see im your fisherman, whats wrong with me? dont write much, just upset today |
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Very nice.Very creative.I liked it alot.
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  lovely
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Hey we all feel the way you do sometime, you are not alone, but there is always tomorrow, and that's life, up and down, without the pain, we wouldn't be able to enjoy the sunshine.....
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thanks for the feedback
i want to stop writing more and this is encouraging |
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Good job....
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Good write!
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very good
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I see you like I view you to see me
And I need you like I need you to need me But heaven knows We can’t always get what we want You left me bittersweet and underhanded Feeling incomplete and reprimanded But there she goes Feeling casual and nonchalant She keeps giving me a reason To step back and accept her treason But for some reason I keep stepping up As if knocking me down was not enough God Please take away the pain Please give me back my sunshine And take away my rain |
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thats really beautiful! thanks everyone
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