Topic: <3~An Unguarded Heart~<3
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Fri 02/22/08 10:28 AM
The mere pericardium to guard one's heart
So inadequate to fend some perilous dart
Ventricular passage allowed sorrow's reign
Shrouded loneliness is such withered pain
Resounding echos off of my chambered wall
Tainted love caused this journeyman's fall
Careless whispers lent such a weary plight
Turbulent courses for it's restless night
Within REM's sleep came humility's groans
By daylight this vessel creaks and moans
Words were carved from some scalpeled hand
Naive exuberance had once shaped this man
This carefree heart ventured out for love
An anxious flight of this snow white dove
Departs it's nest upon one beautiful dawn
A virgin landing found such terrible thorns
Seeking the heavens on such glorious flight
Clouds of deception scattered among night
Returned to the bow of some listless ship
The winds howled as I watched the sun dip
With a weathered beak I'll dutifully stare
By harrowing experience had made me aware
Upon this earth lies such a duality of man
This troubled sufferance so I may understand
Thin comprehension from their blackened sin
Some bitter knowledge from it's dark origin
Despite the truth I'll never relinquish hope
Within dwelling sadness I've learned to cope
Let us open dear hearts and seek love again
Not shackled by pain from one's soul had lend

Written by CyPoet 2/22/08:heart:((bear~hug))
p.s.I wrote this not only for my own closure
but also for my dear friends @ JSH.I Luv U ;)

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Fri 02/22/08 10:39 AM
wow this is a very good write....I love it...flowerforyou

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Fri 02/22/08 11:37 AM
Awwwwwwwwww (((Big bear hugs)))
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

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Fri 02/22/08 11:42 AM
RareRose=flowerforyou+:heart:+ 1(((bear~hug))):tongue:

MsTeddy=flowerforyou+:heart:+ 1(((bear~hug))):tongue:

Thx!ladies;U are both simply bearific.flowerforyou

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Fri 02/22/08 01:21 PM
Very good once againflowerforyou

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Fri 02/22/08 06:03 PM
Very nice write with a meaning felt deeply my friend. :smile:

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Fri 02/22/08 06:10 PM
Lovely.

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Sat 02/23/08 07:19 AM
((((( Steven ))))))

Your heart so pure your words so Inspiring,, so heartfelt,, I have known you for some time now,, and I know life, love and happiness shall overflow your world,, I love you and in my heart i carry you in my world you live,, :heart: :heart:

Bear hugs to you sweetie,,,, :heart:

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Sat 02/23/08 08:57 AM
TXS;my bearific friend.Thx!sweetheartflowerforyou
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MsWizard;a superb writer who has not figured out
who I am yet.Mysteries are bearific hey?flowerforyou
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FadeSpirit;a fantastic writer who writes with an
open heart such as my self(paw shake):smile:
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Denise aka MyAngel.One of the most beautiful people
I have ever known.My friend 4 life that I will always
cherish & feel safe 2 confide in.:heart: flowerforyou
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flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou~:heart:

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Sat 02/23/08 09:01 AM

beautiful, thank you for sharing.

flowerforyou

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Sat 02/23/08 09:08 AM
Thanks!sweetheart 4 your praise.I'm truly glad that U enjoyed it.Them words truly inspire me 2 cont.writing.flowerforyou :heart:

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Sat 02/23/08 09:15 AM
very nice

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Sat 02/23/08 09:45 AM
((((((Pam)))))My bearific friend till the end.Thx!sweetheart.
flowerforyou :heart:

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Sat 02/23/08 06:48 PM
flowerforyou to one bearific friend flowerforyou
great poem

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Sat 02/23/08 06:56 PM
flowerforyou

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Sat 02/23/08 08:22 PM
OkieAngel;one of my most dearest & treasured friends who is virtually a mystery 2 JSH but fortunately not 2 me.U are 1 of my closest friends & my confidant.U are close 2 my heart & so U shall remain 4 all my life.I Luv U sweetheart.Ur bearific friend till thee end.(((((bear~huggie))))Godspeed!CyPoet aka Cybear.:heart: flowerforyou
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Thx!Meandu2.I am bearifically glad that U enjoyed this write.My readers truly inspire me & keep my inner fire glowing.I hope U are enjoying the site also.Godspeed!Cypoet(paw shake):smile: