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Topic: Time
Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Thu 02/21/08 06:19 PM
Time It is given but not in haste Often spent while some make waste. Ever onward it goes To infinity? No one knows. It's what I've spent with you And shared in all we do. It's sometimes lost with age, Or forgotten in turn of page. It is something we can't see And something we'll never be. Always ever here It's language always clear. Now my friends it's past The hour now is cast. Fadedspirit 2/21/2008

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 02/21/08 06:21 PM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 02/21/08 06:23 PM


LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 02/21/08 06:24 PM


bgeorge Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 7850	Thu 02/21/08 06:26 PM
the more birthdays i have the more i think about time slipping away...well put and ty for sharing...i may have you confused w/someone else, but didn't you post a poem not long ago and state that is was your first attempt at poetry??? if so, well you share the gift w/the others

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Thu 02/21/08 06:53 PM
Thanks MirrorMirror, MsTeddyBear, and LAMom. bgeorge, Thanks for the comment. Much appreciated. I believe that you may have me confused, but all is good. I've been writing for about 14 years.

shauna22 Joined Wed 01/16/08 Posts: 228	Fri 02/22/08 02:59 PM


Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Fri 02/22/08 05:41 PM
Thanks shauna

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