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Topic: The Voice
Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/20/08 06:11 PM
The Voice The voice, Oh that sweet voice Spoken across the waters deep. This soul has drowned a thousand times And yet it sleeps in peace. Risen from the murky depths Comprised in feigned, remorsed regret The voice that calls to life. This spirit may yet rise again. The waves of tender spoken thought Shatters the silence within. An angel's voice thus heard in waves Gently lapping my ear, I stir to wake and see in dark But alas there's no one here. Fadedspirit 2/20/2008

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 02/20/08 06:14 PM
Nice!

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 02/20/08 06:16 PM


Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/20/08 06:17 PM
Thanks MsTeddyBear! I'm glad you liked it.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76438	Wed 02/20/08 06:17 PM
good one

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/20/08 06:19 PM
Thanks MirrorMirror. Thanks TxsGal.

shauna22 Joined Wed 01/16/08 Posts: 228	Thu 02/21/08 01:01 PM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Thu 02/21/08 01:28 PM
Look deeper my friend...........

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 02/21/08 05:03 PM
Look deeper my friend...........

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Thu 02/21/08 05:06 PM
Thanks shauna.... Ahh, a sane voice of reason. Thanks dkw.

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