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I can't breath... Theres this feeling in my chest... I can't breath... My heart can't seem to rest... I can't breath... It happens a time or two... I can't breath... When ever I think of you... I can't breath... See me I do gasp... I can't breath... I think its a relapse... I can't breath... Bet you never knew.... I can't breath... When I'm near words from you... I can't breath... Wish I knew what to do... I can't breath... Whenever I see your face... I can't breath... Sleepless nights unrest... I can't breath... All because of you... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By: Teddy (Susan) 02-16-08 |
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great
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Sounds like a heart attack, just kidding. Nice poem.
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That's nice.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I can't breath... Theres this feeling in my chest... I can't breath... My heart can't seem to rest... I can't breath... It happens a time or two... I can't breath... When ever I think of you... I can't breath... See me I do gasp... I can't breath... I think its a relapse... I can't breath... Bet you never knew.... I can't breath... When I'm near words from you... I can't breath... Wish I knew what to do... I can't breath... Whenever I see your face... I can't breath... Sleepless nights unrest... I can't breath... All because of you... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By: Teddy (Susan) 02-16-08 i feel like this daily...pertaining to my sons.... |
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I can't breath... Theres this feeling in my chest... I can't breath... My heart can't seem to rest... I can't breath... It happens a time or two... I can't breath... When ever I think of you... I can't breath... See me I do gasp... I can't breath... I think its a relapse... I can't breath... Bet you never knew.... I can't breath... When I'm near words from you... I can't breath... Wish I knew what to do... I can't breath... Whenever I see your face... I can't breath... Sleepless nights unrest... I can't breath... All because of you... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By: Teddy (Susan) 02-16-08 i feel like this daily...pertaining to my sons.... awww.. |
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Edited by
ArtGurl
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Sat 02/16/08 06:22 PM
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just breathe ((((Teddy))))
(((zanne))) |
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nice words here
keep trying though we want you stay around |
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I got the oxygen mask out!
Thankyou for reading... |
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(((Zanne)))
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(((Zanne))) hand over that mask..plz.... |
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I can't breath... Theres this feeling in my chest... I can't breath... My heart can't seem to rest... I can't breath... It happens a time or two... I can't breath... When ever I think of you... I can't breath... See me I do gasp... I can't breath... I think its a relapse... I can't breath... Bet you never knew.... I can't breath... When I'm near words from you... I can't breath... Wish I knew what to do... I can't breath... Whenever I see your face... I can't breath... Sleepless nights unrest... I can't breath... All because of you... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ By: Teddy (Susan) 02-16-08 i feel like this daily...pertaining to my sons.... awww.. |
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just breathe ((((Teddy)))) (((zanne))) |
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nice write just breath,I've felt that many times
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Good write MsTeddyBear.
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