Topic: ♥Beauty of Land, Earth and Sea♥ | |
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Noden
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Walking into the meadow breeze
wind chiming through the trees hair blowing everywhere praying mantis saying there prayer capturing the mummer of a baby coon while it hides in mothers arms , as she grooms soaring high above in the sky I watched the beauty of eagles fly as gracefully as they can be dancing there just for me reaching into a wild little stream little fishes, making a scene wiggling and swimming hard and fast putting some currents behind the last down ove'r yonder, right beside a oak tree a red haired baby squirrel, looking at me eating away at his nut his mother watching from the hut suddenly it seems to me I've felt the beauty of, land, earth, and sea bending down to my knees I thanked the lord, for all to see Peace walks among me my heart can rest for I've seen the very best. ?Noden? |
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wow noden just wow
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wow noden just wow Thanks, cutie have a wonderful day sweets |
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Amazing my friend!!!..I love it..
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Awwh, that sweet of you, Justlookin |
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Very nice.
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Amazing my friend!!!..I love it.. (((((Blonderocker))))))hi doll, thanks a bunch |
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Very nice. Thank you so much, have a wonderful day hun |
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Walking into the meadow breeze wind chiming through the trees hair blowing everywhere praying mantis saying there prayer capturing the mummer of a baby coon while it hides in mothers arms , as she grooms soaring high above in the sky I watched the beauty of eagles fly as gracefully as they can be dancing there just for me reaching into a wild little stream little fishes, making a scene wiggling and swimming hard and fast putting some currents behind the last down ove'r yonder, right beside a oak tree a red haired baby squirrel, looking at me eating away at his nut his mother watching from the hut suddenly it seems to me I've felt the beauty of, land, earth, and sea bending down to my knees I thanked the lord, for all to see Peace walks among me my heart can rest for I've seen the very best. ?Noden? As I look at all of these the beauty of the flowers the beauty of the trees The birds singing their song the cool summer breeze the buzzing of the wings and such beautiful things I looked at the sky I held up my hand and upon my arm an eagle did land Then as quickly as he came he looked up at the sky he spread his wings and began to fly By Daniel Thank you Noden, for such an awesome poem.. Totally beautiful, just like the author.. hugs |
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Noden what a great day that had to be just to watch the beauty of the land. As the creatures go about there everyday chores sweet one girl.
Aww and a very nice adder Daniel |
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As I look at all of these the beauty of the flowers the beauty of the trees The birds singing their song the cool summer breeze the buzzing of the wings and such beautiful things I looked at the sky I held up my hand and upon my arm an eagle did land Then as quickly as he came he looked up at the sky he spread his wings and began to fly By Daniel Thank you Noden, for such an awesome poem.. Totally beautiful, just like the author.. hugs Thank you so much Daniel, you've been a real good friend to me, chat with you later in IM, thanks for all the smiles last night. Wraps her arms around him real tight. |
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Noden what a great day that had to be just to watch the beauty of the land. As the creatures go about there everyday chores sweet one girl. Aww and a very nice adder Daniel Twas, and I enjoyed every breathing moment of it, glad to see ya woman...and pleased you liked the poem. |
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As I look at all of these the beauty of the flowers the beauty of the trees The birds singing their song the cool summer breeze the buzzing of the wings and such beautiful things I looked at the sky I held up my hand and upon my arm an eagle did land Then as quickly as he came he looked up at the sky he spread his wings and began to fly By Daniel Thank you Noden, for such an awesome poem.. Totally beautiful, just like the author.. hugs Thank you so much Daniel, you've been a real good friend to me, chat with you later in IM, thanks for all the smiles last night. Wraps her arms around him real tight. And in my arms you can take rest as I gently lay your head om my chest I look at your smile I feel you breath as I begin to caress your your body so very tenderly As we lay here by the soft flowing stream the moment takes us to the stars as we ride the moonbeams If you have ever felt heavens touch it's like floating in space with the two of us together in a wonderful embrace By Daniel |
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I must say I am proud of you. That was the best from you I have seen in a long time. I loved it. I felt like I was there as well. Very good descriptives and a beautiful venture. Way to go sis.
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And in my arms you can take rest as I gently lay your head om my chest I look at your smile I feel you breath as I begin to caress your your body so very tenderly As we lay here by the soft flowing stream the moment takes us to the stars as we ride the moonbeams If you have ever felt heavens touch it's like floating in space with the two of us together in a wonderful embrace By Daniel I have waited a life time for this a soul so soothing in a moonlit bliss hearing your lips part with a southern beat you got me tingling inside so deep can't keep my fingers tips, from tracing the firmness of your body, I'm just bakin looking at the twinkle in your eyes I can tell, what going on inside together we'll do this again, and again cause we know!, we don't want it, ever to end so come on and give me more hun loving like this,..well, it's so much fun oooooooh, baby oooooooh, baby can't get enough, can't get enough bump, bump, bump, bump.. bump, bump, bump, bump.. can't get enough of this sweet, sweet love. How's this, Mr. Big Stuff |
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Edited by
Noden
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Sat 02/16/08 01:42 PM
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I must say I am proud of you. That was the best from you I have seen in a long time. I loved it. I felt like I was there as well. Very good descriptive and a beautiful venture. Way to go sis. Thank you Robert, I have to give my poems a punch, cause today I entered another poetry slam at my site, and my opponent is a tough one, so I wrote him and shook his hand at the challenge laid in wait for us... |
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And in my arms you can take rest as I gently lay your head om my chest I look at your smile I feel you breath as I begin to caress your your body so very tenderly As we lay here by the soft flowing stream the moment takes us to the stars as we ride the moonbeams If you have ever felt heavens touch it's like floating in space with the two of us together in a wonderful embrace By Daniel I have waited a life time for this a soul so soothing in a moonlit bliss hearing your lips part with a southern beat you got me tingling inside so deep can't keep my fingers tips, from tracing the firmness of your body, I'm just bakin looking at the twinkle in your eyes I can tell, what going on inside together we'll do this again, and again cause we know!, we don't want it, ever to end so come on and give me more hun loving like this,..well, it's so much fun oooooooh, baby oooooooh, baby can't get enough, can't get enough bump, bump, bump, bump.. bump, bump, bump, bump.. can't get enough of this sweet, sweet love. How's this, Mr. Big Stuff Oh such a lovely smile as I touch your lips and I trace your body with my finger tips I see in your eyes as we lay here together we are riding the stars on the clouds of forever With you at my side and the love that you give you have touched my soul and made me live I kiss your lips I touch your heart no one will ever keep us apart By Daniel There ya go sweetie |
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Edited by
Noden
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Sat 02/16/08 02:10 PM
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Oh such a lovely smile as I touch your lips and I trace your body with my finger tips I see in your eyes as we lay here together we are riding the stars on the clouds of forever With you at my side and the love that you give you have touched my soul and made me live I kiss your lips I touch your heart no one will ever keep us apart By Daniel There ya go sweetie Be still my heart as it skips a beat willing and waiting in this intense heat like a cat on a midnight hunt for its prey we lay here crazed in disarray hearts still poundin for the next touch the steam from our bodies is so, so much I think the windows are all fogged now guess we'll go for another round, wow!! thanks Daniel this is fun |
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Oh such a lovely smile as I touch your lips and I trace your body with my finger tips I see in your eyes as we lay here together we are riding the stars on the clouds of forever With you at my side and the love that you give you have touched my soul and made me live I kiss your lips I touch your heart no one will ever keep us apart By Daniel There ya go sweetie Be still my heart as it skips a beat willing and waiting in this intense heat like a cat on a midnight hunt for its prey we lay here crazed in disarray hearts still poundin for the next touch the steam from our bodies is so, so much I think the windows are all fogged now guess we'll go for another round, wow!! thanks Daniel this is fun With every passing moment that I breath you in you are in my soul let's let it begin Oh for the angel in you together we will stride and on the wings of a pegasus we will both ride With you there it's so easy to do you are an angel you know this is true You have come from heaven you have opened the gate and my heart is for you to take By Daniel |
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