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Topic: reflecting on the cold river
tb74 Joined Wed 01/02/08 Posts: 124	Fri 02/15/08 01:50 PM
--- reflecting on the cold river that moon that in the night flew across the sky and i small pebble upon the shore i thought i saw the crystalline trace of quartz ringing this smooth river sojourner and i imagine that ring gleaming in a thousand thousand nights as a moon most mysterious cast a ray across this shore so many rounds the world rotates the river roars and small pebbles shine ---

wildsideof35 Joined Sat 08/04/07 Posts: 2189	Fri 02/15/08 01:51 PM


TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Fri 02/15/08 04:36 PM
nice one

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 02/15/08 05:26 PM
Ummmmmmmmmm to watch the river flow... Good write!

tb74 Joined Wed 01/02/08 Posts: 124	Sat 02/16/08 03:23 PM
--- on the occasion of a dinner tardy in brusque passing dangerously current the night is filled with airs and staccato syncopation but all the moving removes no chill hearken to the slow slow movement impresario with inspiration from the timing again again there is no time but then a sudden to wake from timeless dreams they were vivid in memory ---

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