Topic: Nothing To Give
Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 02/14/08 06:15 PM
Nothing To Give

I have nothing to give you,
Though I love you, I dare.
Wishing to take
The pain you bear.
May what I take, make you whole,
I am here now, to let you know.
The tears that you cried in dark of night
Gladly I take them and let in the light.
The scars of lonliness, concealed within,
I tried to fix with encouraging grin.
The sad eyes once perceived in pain,
Taken and cleansed, to brighten your day.
Your broken heart scattered to wind,
I found all the pieces, I'm trying to mend.
The sad frown that you gave in denial
Replaced by hope for that inner smile.
I take your worries into my breath,
Taken from you, I'll never regret.
I take away those nights so long
To aid in finding your hidden song.
And last I take the darkness inside,
So no longer you'll feel obligated to hide.
What I take is from you alone,
To show you the path that leads to home.

Fadedspirit 2/14/2008

I know it's pretty rough, but many
things from the heart are found worthwhile.

Derekkye's photo
Thu 02/14/08 06:36 PM
No chick wants to hear that you have nothing to give them - oh except the woman of your dreamsnoway

sendingyoukisses's photo
Thu 02/14/08 06:42 PM
very nice write fadedspirit

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 02/15/08 12:42 AM
flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Fri 02/15/08 10:07 AM
You are so right Spirit. Very good write.

LAMom's photo
Fri 02/15/08 10:16 AM
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TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 02/15/08 11:47 AM
good onebigsmile

kc0003's photo
Fri 02/15/08 04:31 PM
very nice faded

shauna22's photo
Fri 02/15/08 04:40 PM
:heart: flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/15/08 07:49 PM
That's very true Derekkye, thanks for your comment.:smile:

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/15/08 07:55 PM
Once again, I've been proven wrong....lol I didn't think there would be any comments on this one, but still I chose to post. I'm glad I did cause y'all caused me smile again.

Thanks to you Derekkye, sendingyoukisses, MsTeddyBear, Robert (good to see ya back my friend), LAMom, TxsGal, kc, and shauna for making my day better!