Topic: Laps in time... | |
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I've had this time to think,of sweet times
of mistaken times,of forgotten rhymes, just a space,special Laps in time, Were we ever really in Love,this time, her words did not fall, heard every one and all, but was blinded by my own insanity, guided by my own intensity, while looking for diversity, from those I'd really never see, fighting the others hypocracy, sadly for the world to see, broken was this trust,and love for me, broken is my soul forever in eternity, torn is my heart,never in serenity, lonesome tumbles,heart in crumbles, walking my path forever in solitary, waiting only for true Divinity, to lift my broken lonely soul,Eternaly...M. |
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Wow! That was beautiful!
Janet |
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Very heart felt M. tis a good poem.
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thank you
thought of many names to call this one... but thought to just go with this.............M. |
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We all mend my friend, it does take time be I am proof we all mend.
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sometimes in our mending we in turn help mend others. poem was great
micheal |
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thanx y'all!
anybody got a band-aid? |
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thank you all who reads my rhyme,
just a momentary laps in time, really almost lost my mind, from this dapple laps from time, lost for the memories of fears, gone are those moments of tears, within this momentary laps in years, was a blast from my past, and all the knowlege I had grained, empty,as if I were de-brained, emotions slowly forever drained, feelings slowly ever waned, nothing more could be even gained, void of loves,sorry for the pained, was a momentary laps in time, was a memory lost in rhyme, now just a memory lost in time..........M. |
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thats good. as it should be.
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we all want to see our relationships in an optimistic light,
especially when we think it's "it". Unfortunately, it's that optimistic light which blinds us, and refuses to let us see the surfacing of problems... When were alone again, the optimistic outlook disappears and we finally get a glimpse of what we had, where we were, and what we should have done differently. Too bad, by that time, it's usually too late! But we live and learn and usually it can only get better from where we stand at that point. Hang in there! Good heart-felt write m.! |
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to mend the rift the very most you should get out of it is
friendship....... |
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just happy to be friends again...peace?
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peace works for me
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and,and,and.....ummmmmmmm....
JEEEEEEELLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! |
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yes there is always Jello
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and the very least also CCP! I've always remained friends with my
ex-girlfriends, or at least did my part to try! If you can hate someone you thought you loved once, it was never real love. It takes two to tango, so if one person just doesn't dance, neither should ,or could, be blamed for souring a relationship. You can't blame someeone who wants it and trys , nor the other who tried and doesn't want it. You just keep searching for that mutual want for eachothers compannionship! One day we'll all find it..... I hope! |
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Very well written M.
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had to put the heart on a back burner,,,
came from deep within my lonely soul.....M. |
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Very nice cuz. At least you have indeed made a friend. Friends are
forever and well you know..... |
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Happy Holidays y'all!!!
Michael1313 |
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