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Topic: Laps in time...
michael1313's photo
Fri 12/15/06 10:11 AM
I've had this time to think,of sweet times
of mistaken times,of forgotten rhymes,
just a space,special Laps in time,
Were we ever really in Love,this time,
her words did not fall,
heard every one and all,
but was blinded by my own insanity,
guided by my own intensity,
while looking for diversity,
from those I'd really never see,
fighting the others hypocracy,
sadly for the world to see,
broken was this trust,and love for me,
broken is my soul forever in eternity,
torn is my heart,never in serenity,
lonesome tumbles,heart in crumbles,
walking my path forever in solitary,
waiting only for true Divinity,
to lift my broken lonely soul,Eternaly...M.

jem50's photo
Fri 12/15/06 10:18 AM
Wow! That was beautiful!

Janet

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 12/15/06 11:45 AM
Very heart felt M. tis a good poem.

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/15/06 11:46 AM
thank you
thought of many names to call this one...
but thought to just go with this.............M.

Gryphyn's photo
Fri 12/15/06 12:45 PM
We all mend my friend, it does take time be I am proof we all mend.

iceprincess's photo
Fri 12/15/06 03:34 PM
sometimes in our mending we in turn help mend others. poem was great
micheal

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/15/06 03:48 PM
thanx y'all!
anybody got a band-aid?

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/15/06 05:22 PM
thank you all who reads my rhyme,
just a momentary laps in time,
really almost lost my mind,
from this dapple laps from time,

lost for the memories of fears,
gone are those moments of tears,
within this momentary laps in years,

was a blast from my past,
and all the knowlege I had grained,
empty,as if I were de-brained,
emotions slowly forever drained,
feelings slowly ever waned,
nothing more could be even gained,
void of loves,sorry for the pained,

was a momentary laps in time,
was a memory lost in rhyme,
now just a memory lost in time..........M.

iceprincess's photo
Fri 12/15/06 05:27 PM
thats good. as it should be.

44hello's photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:02 PM
we all want to see our relationships in an optimistic light,
especially when we think it's "it". Unfortunately, it's that
optimistic light which blinds us, and refuses to let us see the
surfacing of problems... When were alone again, the optimistic outlook
disappears and we finally get a glimpse of what we had, where we
were, and what we should have done differently. Too bad, by that
time, it's usually too late! But we live and learn and usually it can
only get better from where we stand at that point. Hang in there!
Good heart-felt write m.!

no photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:04 PM
to mend the rift the very most you should get out of it is
friendship.......

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:10 PM
just happy to be friends again...peace?

no photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:12 PM
peace works for me

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:15 PM
and,and,and.....ummmmmmmm....

JEEEEEEELLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

no photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:16 PM
yes there is always Jello

44hello's photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:17 PM
and the very least also CCP! I've always remained friends with my
ex-girlfriends, or at least did my part to try! If you can hate
someone you thought you loved once, it was never real love. It takes
two to tango, so if one person just doesn't dance, neither should ,or
could, be blamed for souring a relationship. You can't blame someeone
who wants it and trys , nor the other who tried and doesn't want it.
You just keep searching for that mutual want for eachothers
compannionship! One day we'll all find it..... I hope!

karmafury's photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:44 PM
Very well written M.

michael1313's photo
Fri 12/15/06 06:52 PM
had to put the heart on a back burner,,,
came from deep within my lonely soul.....M.

mimi420's photo
Fri 12/15/06 11:08 PM
Very nice cuz. At least you have indeed made a friend. Friends are
forever and well you know.....

michael1313's photo
Sat 12/16/06 12:09 AM
Happy Holidays y'all!!!

Michael1313

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