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Topic: Slip Of The Tongue
Ghostrider2u Joined Thu 05/17/07 Posts: 6953	Wed 02/13/08 07:01 PM Edited by Ghostrider2u on Wed 02/13/08 07:01 PM
Words of the tongue written or spoken can not be undone once they have broken The power they hold once unleashed takes control of those they've reached Death and distruction or Joy and Peace in the construction of our speech No thought taken before released leaving us shaken wishing they'd ceased Some compassion before we write consideration might lessen the bite Never thought I'd hear from you the words that wrought This pain undue

wilkit Joined Sat 02/02/08 Posts: 439	Wed 02/13/08 07:07 PM
very well done

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76461	Wed 02/13/08 07:38 PM
Words can cut like a knife or make things smooth as butter. We should make sure of what we say or write for once they have been recieved they have already done the damage at times that can not be repaired. Good write

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 02/14/08 02:38 AM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Thu 02/14/08 06:14 AM
Beautifully stated, Ghost.

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