Topic: eyes of the soul
jimz's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:13 AM
the crowd
behind
the soul
really
in a
soul
but we
see
what we
want to

I've
tried
to give
my soul
weapons
reasons
tried to
make it
feel guilty
for all
the wrongs
I've done

do you
know
in my
war
I was
fighting
God

streams of angels
washing my drams

gallerys of
moving images
I pick out
what I want
feel

all life
a dream
sometimes truth
is not reality
I mean
do you see God
and he's the most
real thing
of
all





robinlynn42's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:15 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

davidben1's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:16 AM
did u write this?

jimz's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:22 AM
Thank you, Robinlynn. Yes, davidben1, I just wrote it, thank you for reading.

peace
jimmy

2Btrue2One's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:24 AM
Nice one Jim, I can see the story in it..

jimz's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:26 AM
Thank you, 2Betrue2one, god bless

peace
jimmy

davidben1's photo
Wed 02/13/08 02:28 AM

the crowd
behind
the soul
really
in a
soul
but we
see
what we
want to

I've
tried
to give
my soul
weapons
reasons
tried to
make it
feel guilty
for all
the wrongs
I've done

do you
know
in my
war
I was
fighting
God

streams of angels
washing my drams

gallerys of
moving images
I pick out
what I want
feel

all life
a dream
sometimes truth
is not reality
I mean
do you see God
and he's the most
real thing
of
all








****ing awesome Jimz....some of the truest truth i have heard in much time.

pkh's photo
Wed 02/13/08 06:26 AM
flowerforyou one we can always depend on