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Topic: A Teasing Reality
Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sat 02/09/08 08:00 PM
A Teasing Reality Etched in my soul Are the words to reveal, For once they are written, They can't be resealed. Waiting for fate To release my cold heart. Feeling your light, My warmth in the dark. A revelation yet to be told, A glimpse of the future, Now to behold. My love will wait till forever is through, Having patience with caring, this must I do. The bond that is felt, much stronger than love And never is quenched or never enough. I will be patient, for you know I am kind Someone truer than you, never I'll find. You've caused me to grow and you've given me life, Amid all the worries, what not, and strife. I'll close now by saying I'll always be there, When you are needing someone special to care. I know it's a tease Writing words much like these, But atleast you now know Something I feel so deep in my soul. Fadedspirit 2/9/2008

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 02/09/08 08:02 PM


PATSFAN Joined Mon 12/10/07 Posts: 42782	Sat 02/09/08 08:02 PM


kirk443 Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 5723	Sat 02/09/08 08:03 PM
A Teasing Reality Etched in my soul Are the words to reveal, For once they are written, They can't be resealed. Waiting for fate To release my cold heart. Feeling your light, My warmth in the dark. A revelation yet to be told, A glimpse of the future, Now to behold. My love will wait till forever is through, Having patience with caring, this must I do. The bond that is felt, much stronger than love And never is quenched or never enough. I will be patient, for you know I am kind Someone truer than you, never I'll find. You've caused me to grow and you've given me life, Amid all the worries, what not, and strife. I'll close now by saying I'll always be there, When you are needing someone special to care. I know it's a tease Writing words much like these, But atleast you now know Something I feel so deep in my soul. Fadedspirit 2/9/2008 to me that is a "cry call" and a bit depressing.

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sat 02/09/08 08:20 PM
Thanks MirrorMirror and PATSFAN! Kirk, To each his own, but go depress yourself somewhere more suited for your needs. Your words only bring you shame. "those who speak with the mouth of a fool are often found lacking in wisdom and truth." from voices of truth in a dark world.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 02/09/08 08:44 PM
(((Fade)))

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sat 02/09/08 08:46 PM
Awww, thanks (((MsTeddyBear!)))

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 02/09/08 09:08 PM
humm? hope, faith and internal recognition…how does one get depression from that ? nice one faded (or maybe I read the wrong one)

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sat 02/09/08 09:21 PM
Thanks for the comment kc..you read the right one....someone just needs to remove a stick that got deposited in the wrong place....lol

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sat 02/09/08 09:25 PM
Thanks for the comment kc..you read the right one....someone just needs to remove a stick that got deposited in the wrong place....lol Ouch! yes i see where that could cause pain but not necessarily depression … lol

EtherealEmbers Joined Sun 02/03/08 Posts: 6580	Sat 02/09/08 09:27 PM
I don't think it's very nice that you attacked the only one that said something which you perceived to be negative. Poetry will never give everyone the same view. Every good writer knows that.

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sat 02/09/08 09:36 PM
As I said before, To each his own, but go depress yourself somewhere more suited for your needs. And if it was just a simple view, someone truly wishing to give their view would also explain. enough said.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 02/09/08 09:39 PM
Very Nice Indeed

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sat 02/09/08 09:41 PM
Awww thanks LAMom!

EtherealEmbers Joined Sun 02/03/08 Posts: 6580	Sat 02/09/08 09:41 PM
As I said before, To each his own, but go depress yourself somewhere more suited for your needs. And if it was just a simple view, someone truly wishing to give their view would also explain. enough said. You seem very bitter... and attacking... everyone is allowed to express their opinions in an open forum... and I can see why that other guy would say that it was depressing, it depends on how you look at it... Welcome to America!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76471	Sat 02/09/08 10:34 PM
another good one

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sat 02/09/08 10:37 PM
Awww, thanks TxsGal. Always enjoy your visits.

shauna22 Joined Wed 01/16/08 Posts: 228	Sun 02/10/08 07:28 AM


kirk443 Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 5723	Sun 02/10/08 07:34 AM
As I said before, To each his own, but go depress yourself somewhere more suited for your needs. And if it was just a simple view, someone truly wishing to give their view would also explain. enough said. You seem very bitter... and attacking... everyone is allowed to express their opinions in an open forum... and I can see why that other guy would say that it was depressing, it depends on how you look at it... Welcome to America!! Thankyou Ethereal - America is all about Freedom of Speech!

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Sun 02/10/08 09:27 AM
Aww thanks shauna!