Fading

I know that one day
I will fade to unknown,
When darkness surrounds,
And bids me to go.
I'll carry your heart,
My beacon of hope,
Forcing my fears
To simply let go.
You're all that I wanted,
I lived life for you,
I gave you my heart,
So tender and true.
You were my strength
And angel always.
Holding me close
Till the end of my days.
Your tears of great saddness
Will be felt in me
And comfort I'll send,
Though I no longer will be.
Just so you know,
I'll make it just fine
And I'll wait for you here
Forever in time.

Fadedspirit 2/7/2008

very nice

Thanks openheart and LAMom!

Once again you have tugged at my heartstrings...good stuff! Thanks I enjoyed this one alot.

awww, thanks songstress. One of these days, I'll get better at writing...lol

we need to rename you faded, heart-tugger actually fits you or if you wanna be more thief in the night style, we could call ya heart-mugger. Your writes are pleasures to the senses, my friend.

Aww thanks shauna!

LOL DKW, *hiding black bag* I just like to write. Ahh, thanks for the comment. Comments like this are my inspirations to keep writing. lol.....I don't think I'd really try to mug a heart though....it may bleed all over me...lol

from a writing standpoint its marvelous and flows...

from a caring heartfelt perspective...it takes a huge heart to write such a caring piece

NICE

Thanks for your comment and insight GCLIFE!
Much appreciated.

very nice and heartfelt

Thanks again TxsGal!

BRAVO!

that was a damn good one fadedspirit well done*claps*

Ahh, Thanks for the comment Storm.

Thanks Wolf19. I'm glad you liked it!

ooh I really liked this one faded. Well done!

It really is nice to see so much talent in the poem section.. very good poem my friend..

Many thanks for your comment ArtGurl, I'm glad you liked it!

I agree 2Btrue and it's truly an inspiration to keep writing. Thanks for the comment!