Topic: Unrequited Love
suzyQ41's photo
Thu 02/07/08 04:06 PM
If You Only Knew

If you only knew what went through my head
As i toss and turn, bound to my bed
Visions of you, a smile sweeping your face
All these thoughts i could never erase
Your arms locked close around me keeping my heart warm
Gazing into your pale eyes, i'm miles from the storm

If you only knew how my heart sings
From all the light your presence brings
You touch my hand and my heart is gripped
My guard is down and from my cares i am stripped
But i believe deep down your heart won't call
Then i'll have to recover from this final fall

If you only knew how i long to say
"Your all i love through the night and day."
With my heart pounding fast and hands in a shake
Knowing with this secret my heart you could break
Your paralyzing stare steal my intention
So i guess my love will never reach mention

no photo
Thu 02/07/08 04:08 PM
smokin drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 02/07/08 04:22 PM
flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Thu 02/07/08 05:20 PM
Excellent write...very powerful, heartfelt words. :smile: flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/07/08 06:32 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how beautiful flowerforyou :heart:

sealove42's photo
Thu 02/07/08 06:49 PM
Oh, the love that we never mention, sometimes I think that is so pleasuable to cherish. Even without it, its something that is special.

Thanks for sharing.

TAB

suzyQ41's photo
Fri 02/08/08 06:33 AM
Thanks friends, but I can't take the credit.

This was written by my 16 year old daughter.

She is an awesome writer and wanted to get some feedback. She is entering this poem in a contest.

So much heart for one so young.

flowerforyou flowerforyou

lizardking19's photo
Fri 02/08/08 09:24 AM
Edited by lizardking19 on Fri 02/08/08 09:24 AM
Thats a good poem

Hey waitaminnute What kind of 16 year old shows a poem LIKE THAT to HER MOTHER!?noway

shauna22's photo
Fri 02/08/08 09:34 AM
flowerforyou