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And tell me that she loved me true.
Now in darkness there is no light As I wonder though an empty night. Do I dare to scream out loud And release this Paine with no doubt. And if I do will it be you To whisper back you’re love me true. Our paths have cross I know not why Question is would you be mine. Take my hand your in mine let us walk till the end of time. You have my heart in your hands Lets not pretend to understand. Let us try and find the light And hope we make it through the night. |
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It’s been fifteen years since I lost my wife
My soul mate which I always held tight. She could clear my mind when things were not bright And hold my tight all through the night. She would cleanse my soul when I was blue And tell me that she loved me true. Now in darkness there is no light As I wonder though an empty night. Do I dare to scream out loud And release this Paine with no doubt. And if I do will it be you To whisper back you’re love me true. Our paths have cross I know not why Question is would you be mine. Take my hand your in mine let us walk till the end of time. You have my heart in your hands Lets not pretend to understand. Let us try and find the light And hope we make it through the night. |
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very nice
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Very Good I hope you get your answer.
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thank you ppl, you are all too kind
but I wrote this for her so we shall see |
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Awwww Poison you will walk that path again
with one that loves you very soon. Wishing you only the very best in the days to come. |
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tank you txs, just felt like writing something....
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good work "Leader"...M.
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thanks mike
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Your poem was very touching. Sometimes you need to write what is in
your heart to share with others to lesson the pain. It is so hard to lose someone you care about and I think even harder to find another special someone to share your life with. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. I write poems myself but most are about my dreams. This is one I wrote. Treasured Memory The moon in its splendor Casts its warmth upon the blackened waters. Silence is all around except for the birds heard in the distance And the sound of the lovers hearts beating as they embrace. The lovers watch in fascination As the waters' waves caresses and distorts the moon’s beauty, Rippling its reflection in so many layers. The moon’s warmth touches their faces And brings them ever closer in their togetherness. They embrace and kiss softly, enjoying their passion and love. The moon casts its' glow upon them And watches intently. This moment is embedded in their hearts forever. A treasured memory, not soon forgotten. Maybe one day this will be your treasured memory or mine. |
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awesome peoms guys sometimes it takes people to write peoms like this to
open ones eyes |
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GOOD WORDS TO READ AND REMIND ME IM STILL FREE.
SOMEONE TO MAKE WORDS AND BE A POET,POISON,U SURE SHOULD-IT. YOU BOTH HAVE GREAT FEELINGS IN THESE POEMS OF YOUR SPIRITS... |
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