Topic: Mind Wildly Trances
brwnkimba's photo
Sun 02/03/08 03:04 AM
Passionate as her needs are
his availability she ponders.
As time quickly closes in on all her wonders.
Still a close race between lust and love
with innocence not far behind.
For what my Queen wills
her destiny shall also be mine.
Temple kissed by her angelic lips
this would be my first true bliss.
Games with hearts:heart:I play not,
my mischievous child side long gone
but not forgot.
Your words ravage me as I
think it was the plan.
Leaving me flush inside
my mind wildly trances.
More than a glimpse
you have gifted me with,
this river will never run dry.
Open my heart and author new
pages on my soul, know on me you can rely.

BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 02/03/08 03:06 AM
Another gem from you Kimba, very meaningful and so well written

no photo
Sun 02/03/08 03:09 AM
VERY NICELY WRITTEN YOU HAVE A GREAT GIFT DONT EVER LOOSE THAT GIFT YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER

brwnkimba's photo
Sun 02/03/08 03:09 AM
Edited by brwnkimba on Sun 02/03/08 03:11 AM
I'm am so sleepy, thanks B-Miss & Daddys X-G-X. I think I'll crash now.

Blessings my friendsyawn:heart:

pkh's photo
Sun 02/03/08 03:24 AM
very nice write

Noden's photo
Sun 02/03/08 05:02 AM
oh, Kimba so soft and sensual, beautiful heartfelt poem, now go sleep my friend, and bring forth another page of poem reborn...flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 02/03/08 08:59 AM
Excellent write!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 02/03/08 02:52 PM
flowerforyou :smile: flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Sun 02/03/08 04:09 PM
Thank you P.K.H ,Noden, Faded & Ms. Teddy-Bhappy

LAMom's photo
Sun 02/03/08 09:01 PM
flowerforyou :heart: :heart: