Topic: When
Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 11:29 PM
When

When I gaze into your loving eyes
I see for us there's no surprise.
When I feel your love surround me deep
You are the one, I yearn to keep.
When all things become shadows
In the light of you,
I know it's love, thus tried and true.
When I've found the joy of reaching your heart
When my will becomes enthralled in your love
My heart and spirit shall never be filled
Enough!
I love you true, I love you sweet
The reason I live begins with you
And ends in we.

Fadedspirit 2/1/2008

Wolfeyes58's photo
Fri 02/01/08 11:36 PM
Now that was beautiful Spirit...I hope it was for someone endearing?

songstress1's photo
Fri 02/01/08 11:39 PM
When my will becomes enthralled in your love
My heart and spirit shall never be filled


Wow I loved that line very romantic Faded!!

kc0003's photo
Fri 02/01/08 11:46 PM
that is nice
born of hope?
or a dedication?

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 11:47 PM
Thanks Robert....nope....just more writing from a well meaning hopeful.


Thanks songstress, I have my moments...once in a while...

klugman's photo
Sat 02/02/08 07:22 AM
Very sweet poem

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 02/02/08 07:44 AM
real nice and heartfelt some day you will have that one to read itbigsmile

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 02/02/08 08:52 PM
Thanks klugman. drinker

Thanks TxsGal....maybe one day. :smile:

pkh's photo
Sat 02/02/08 08:55 PM
beautiful words

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 02/02/08 09:05 PM
Thanks pkh :smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 02/02/08 09:42 PM
You write some really good writes!
drinker flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 02/02/08 09:53 PM
Awww, thanks MsTeddyBear! :smile: you're a sweetheart.