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When I gaze into your loving eyes I see for us there's no surprise. When I feel your love surround me deep You are the one, I yearn to keep. When all things become shadows In the light of you, I know it's love, thus tried and true. When I've found the joy of reaching your heart When my will becomes enthralled in your love My heart and spirit shall never be filled Enough! I love you true, I love you sweet The reason I live begins with you And ends in we. Fadedspirit 2/1/2008 |
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Now that was beautiful Spirit...I hope it was for someone endearing?
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When my will becomes enthralled in your love
My heart and spirit shall never be filled Wow I loved that line very romantic Faded!! |
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that is nice
born of hope? or a dedication? |
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Thanks Robert....nope....just more writing from a well meaning hopeful.
Thanks songstress, I have my moments...once in a while... |
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Very sweet poem
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real nice and heartfelt some day you will have that one to read it
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Thanks klugman.
Thanks TxsGal....maybe one day. |
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beautiful words
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Thanks pkh
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You write some really good writes!
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Awww, thanks MsTeddyBear! you're a sweetheart.
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