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Topic: Leaf
klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Fri 02/01/08 04:57 PM
Its so cold, as the wind rushes against my face I wish I could open my eyes, so I could see this place My cheeks flutter in the freezing wind Where am I ??? How did this begin ??? A rush of coldness against my back I try to open my eyes, and get just a crack A murky grey surrounds me, wetness I want to turn around, curiosity beckons I try to turn, so I can see All is a forest, oh look its a leaf DB 2/1/2008

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Fri 02/01/08 05:01 PM
"giggles", that was so sweet, Klug

a4leafclover2u2 Joined Thu 01/10/08 Posts: 153	Fri 02/01/08 05:01 PM
Sporty

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Fri 02/01/08 05:02 PM
nice one

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Fri 02/01/08 05:10 PM Edited by klugman on Fri 02/01/08 05:18 PM
Thanx Its actually about a childhood nightmare I used to have, with a twist...

rozey2680 Joined Fri 11/10/06 Posts: 13559	Fri 02/01/08 05:20 PM
very good Danny!

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Fri 02/01/08 06:15 PM
Thanx Its actually about a childhood nightmare I used to have, with a twist... I am sorry, guess poems mean something different to everyone, glad your grown away from this bad nightmare of your's there not fun at all, I still get them...

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Sat 02/02/08 07:24 AM
Thanks Rozey We just have to find the good in the nightmares of our past...

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