Topic: The Gift
Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 09:22 AM
The Gift

I sit here and think
What can I do,
For a woman so special
A woman like you.
Something that's different
That comes from the heart,
Nothing too normal,
I want to impart.
Flowers are good,
A song would be nice,
Neither of these
I think would suffice.
A dinner and movie,
Sure things for a date,
Still not as special,
What I wish to relay.
I have to keep thinking,
My mind says with groan,
The voice in my head
Sighs with a moan.
My heart then chimes in
To silence the voice,
Grabbing some duct tape
But feeling no choice.
My mind is subdued,
Stuck in the gray.
Struggling within
What else can I say?
I'll give you a verse
And speak it so soft,
Almost in whisper
As I carry you off.
I'll gaze in your eyes,
While caressing your soul,
Ending with kisses
You've never yet known.

Fadedspirit 2/1/2008

Noden's photo
Fri 02/01/08 09:26 AM
Wow, see what I mean, that was a most awesome dreamflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 02/01/08 09:27 AM
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pkh's photo
Fri 02/01/08 09:33 AM
flowerforyou beautiful

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 09:33 AM
Ok, now see ya went and made me smile. Many thanks Noden. :smile:


Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 09:34 AM
Awww, thanks LAMom and pkh! flowerforyou

Noden's photo
Fri 02/01/08 09:42 AM

Ok, now see ya went and made me smile. Many thanks Noden. :smile:





Very good, I like that:wink:

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 09:58 AM
When I smile, people tend to run away screaming. lol
Since you like it, I'll keep one handy.....Don't say I didn't warn ya though.

klugman's photo
Fri 02/01/08 10:07 AM
Yeah...what in the heck do I get for her ???ohwell

Good Question...happy

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 10:09 AM

Yeah...what in the heck do I get for her ???ohwell

Good Question...happy


That very well could be an eternal question....lol

klugman's photo
Fri 02/01/08 10:12 AM
answerless

kc0003's photo
Fri 02/01/08 04:23 PM
good write faded

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 02/01/08 04:48 PM
Okay have to ask what the hell was the duct tape for hehehhelaugh laugh laugh laugh noway noway noway bigsmile


Good one tho just had me confused for a moment but hell that is not hard to dolaugh laugh laugh laugh

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 07:19 PM
Thanks kc!:smile:

LOL......Thanks TxsGal....Though I lost a mouthful of soda when I read your comment, ya really know how to make me laugh.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 02/01/08 09:11 PM
The gift of your heart... :heart:

Beautiful write Fadedspirit!

songstress1's photo
Fri 02/01/08 10:10 PM
Duct tape...never would have thought of that one...
But nonetheless Faded great write..as usual.flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 10:30 PM
Awww, thanks MsTeddyBear. I'm glad to see you're back! :smile: flowerforyou

LOL....thanks songstress!:smile:
They say duct tape can fix anything! I thought it worked pretty well....lol