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Topic: Leak
klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Thu 01/31/08 06:36 AM
A filthy grime covers the doorway behind me. Leaking out from the cracks along the edges. The door bulges against the weight behind it. If it should be opened what might happen ? Would I be choked by the pain, and hurt ? Would I be overcome by the filth of my past ? Or would your love cover me, seal me ? There is but one way to know... DB 1/31/2008

daddysxgirlx35 Joined Mon 11/12/07 Posts: 588	Thu 01/31/08 06:39 AM
u will be fine

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Thu 01/31/08 06:43 AM
Nice write and imagery!

cinderlu57 Joined Fri 11/30/07 Posts: 231	Thu 01/31/08 06:47 AM
your kidding, right????

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Thu 01/31/08 06:56 AM Edited by klugman on Thu 01/31/08 07:06 AM
LOL Its called writing...

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 01/31/08 07:46 AM
Release the past, live for the Now,, Open the door,, So many endless possibilities,,, Nice write,,,

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Thu 01/31/08 12:56 PM
Dude, always like your work. peace jimmy

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Thu 01/31/08 02:12 PM
ooo, Klug this is simple but awesome......

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Thu 01/31/08 02:15 PM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 01/31/08 04:00 PM
nice write klugman

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 02/01/08 11:54 AM
nice write we all have a past letting it go can be hard as I know but I never lose hope and will never give up the fight

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Fri 02/01/08 12:03 PM


Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Fri 02/01/08 12:09 PM
There's no life in the past, let it go darlin be reborn...it can be done...

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