Topic: Tears of Fall
animegypsyz's photo
Wed 01/30/08 08:46 PM
Tears of Fall

The tears of fall plummet to the ground
Somber and solace, a sight so profound

The plant life prepares for cryogenic slumber
The leaves always tumble, in the fall of September

Why am I forced every year, to watch the trees cry?
The cold so sharp, gusting from a dead sky

Their arms reach up, naked, so high
They will never be free until the day they die

Location decided on the day of their birth
Roots dug deep encased in solid earth

Stationary being, bored and lonely
Standing after the tears of fall, naked, and homely

Woni's photo
Wed 01/30/08 08:48 PM
Nice write flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 01/30/08 08:59 PM
Very beautiful my name means tree

sealove42's photo
Wed 01/30/08 09:13 PM
Nice words, very well written and complimenting ideas.


Enya's photo
Wed 01/30/08 09:20 PM



:heart: GREAT JOB:heart:

animegypsyz's photo
Wed 01/30/08 09:49 PM
Thanks for all the kind words guys I really appreciate it.

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 02/01/08 05:49 AM
You definately have a talent for painting a picture with your words. Nice write! :smile:

pkh's photo
Fri 02/01/08 06:46 AM
good write