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“Never Give Up”
When we think there is no more. We never know what is in store. We take a look at our past. And wonder will this last. This road we walk alone. To others our hearts we have shown. But in the end our hearts were broke. Seems they never heard a word we spoke. We sit and wonder why. As the tears fall that we cry. We don’t understand. Why things did not go the way we planned. Seems no matter how hard we tried. In the end we sit and cried. Then there comes a day. Another comes our way. We wonder do they see. Who we are and can it be? That finally that one has come at last. No longer will it be like the past. For now we have finally meet the one. Even though it seemed like a long run. We now can see a future ahead. And it is one that we no longer dread. We have taken the time to see. How life can truly be. With each other we have spent the time and talked. This road we both at one time have walked. We have taken this time to first become a friend. That will stay until the end. Soon we will walk along that path one day. Hand n hand as we listen, to what each other has to say. Here before long that day will come our way. And we will know if our hearts are there to stay. K.L.M 1/30/2008 |
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No words can describe my love for you and within your words, you have guided me so many times,, I love you,,, and yes the road is long, painful, joyful yet so worth the travel |
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No words can describe my love for you and within your words, you have guided me so many times,, I love you,,, and yes the road is long, painful, joyful yet so worth the travel So true girl, and it is one that I will travel until I find the one. That when we walk hand n hand along that path and look into each others eyes. We will both know the journey has been well worth the wait indeed. |
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Txs, you justify hope so well in this poem
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This was really good Kristi...The last four lines are the best...I know where I will be spending my future.
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Txs, you justify hope so well in this poem |
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Peaches in Texas?? Return to the top of the page, read the original post, do you not agree they do have at least one y'all............
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Nicely written about finding love... sweetly letting go of the hurt. Thanks for the reminder that there is always a chance around the bend for love.
Take Care |
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Kristi
You always seem to write something when I need to hear it. Thanks for all your wonderful insight. |
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Ahh, very nice write. A ray of hope that speaks volumes.
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Very nice write, seems we both have a similar flow to our words. Nicely done
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loved the write
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You are all way to kind thank you very much for your words. No matter what comes our way we should never give up for within time and trial we shall overcome.
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You are all way to kind thank you very much for your words. No matter what comes our way we should never give up for within time and trial we shall overcome. Yeah...Either that or 'Learn Better' |
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You are all way to kind thank you very much for your words. No matter what comes our way we should never give up for within time and trial we shall overcome. Yeah...Either that or 'Learn Better' Naw no matter what I will not give up nor will you why......... cause we know to find that treasure is like a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow we will keep going till we find our pot of gold. |
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I know this...but you do learn alot on that journey to the end of the rainbow...I know I have.
My pot of gold is in my heart , and soon to be in my arms. |
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