Topic: look at me
otterman's photo
Tue 01/29/08 10:54 AM
Look at me,not with your eyes
they must be closed,to get your prize
like a snowflake,i'm sure to melt
like a cutting,i will be felt
and do you care,to stare for a while
are you willing to walk,the endless mile
again i have risen,from a great fall
to fly once again, to heed my call
you only see, the side you hate
trapped in your box,with no escape
i will not hate,for i have grown
and my worth,is finally shown
yet i wonder, in the pool you stare
are you seeing yourself,is that why your scared
but no matter how low,no matter what i do
you'll see some of me,embeded in you

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 01/29/08 11:23 AM
Hmmmm --- true.

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/29/08 11:26 AM
Enlightened,,, Yes flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 01/29/08 03:43 PM
Nice! drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/29/08 04:17 PM
ohhhhhhhh so very true reminds me of looking at one someone else and seeing parts of me of the past good write.flowerforyou