Topic: Touch Me
Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 01/29/08 02:10 AM
Touch me.........

No, not with your hands,
with your eyes.
See me as I truly am.
Look deep and see that which
bubbles and brews beneath the surface
in the cauldron of my soul.

Touch me........
With emotion you fear
to show so many others.

Touch my mind..........
Thoughts dancing and twirling
in an irish jig of joy, confusion,
and ponderous calm ending
in the bliss of comprehension.

Show me.............
You
Raw and unadorned
as I AM..................

timmyschillin's photo
Tue 01/29/08 02:11 AM
I'm lacking the intelligence level to understand this. Good effort though!bigsmile

higlander's photo
Tue 01/29/08 02:25 AM
Edited by higlander on Tue 01/29/08 02:26 AM
huh huh huh huh?

no photo
Tue 01/29/08 02:58 AM
Beautiful!!!flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/29/08 07:17 AM
I came... pondered a bit
I Saw.... beauty in its rarest form
I listened.... Calm instilled
I love....:heart: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/29/08 07:50 AM
Aww to see the soul within the person not what is on the outside, to understand ones mind and to love unconditionally.
And to let another see the real you is hard at times
but can be done.flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 01/29/08 08:12 AM
Verrrry nice....

Ahh to churn the cauldron of soul,
Inviting the touch
Of a familiar you know.
Begging release
Of emotion thus feared,
An uneasy task;
Unreadily reared.
Touching a mind,
Viewing thoughts as they dance,
Time thus forgotten
As hearts dare a chance.




songstress1's photo
Tue 01/29/08 08:16 AM
lovelyflowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 01/29/08 09:28 AM
Uh-huh, uh-huh, Go Faded, Go Faded!

Thanks Note-able one (songstress)

:heart: LAMom and Tex smooched

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 01/29/08 09:31 AM
Excellent Wench flowerforyou

Dragoness's photo
Tue 01/29/08 09:40 AM
I enjoyed this, thanks wench for showing us youflowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 01/29/08 09:45 AM
ooh I am giddy with glee ... I love this...

I see
I feel
I comprehend

There is nothing truly separate... :heart:

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 01/29/08 09:59 AM
Thanks, MissB (I'm sorry BonnyMiss, I'm always gonna get your name backwards, must be 20+ years in the South).

Hmmm, ya know, Dragon, I hadn't really noticed that til you just mentioned it. Have to quit thinkin 'bout that particular muse...

Yeyyyy, giddy, gleeful Art. You teach well m'dear!