Topic: The Lonesome Rider
Wolfeyes58's photo
Sat 01/26/08 06:56 PM


The Lonesome Rider

Trotting through the majestic land
Of cacti and tumbleweeds,
Weary from my long journey
Upon my trusty steed.
He leads to me to a gentle spring
Fresh water for us to drink,
Joshua trees that surround it
Sage, just on the brink.
It was so clean and pure
Felt good across my neck,
I dampened my bandana
To wash my face of dirty flecks.
"We shall rest here tonight
Cochise, my handsome horse",
I walk to gather wood for fire
Plotting another course.
The fire is roaring now
Sending up its fairy ash,
I yank on a piece of jerky
In the weeds, I hear a thrash.
Cochise was unsteady to the noise
Company we weren't expecting,
When I looked across the pool
I saw what was reflecting.
Two steely eyes of a wolf
Black, just as my steed,
He made no threats of entrance
He just wanted to feed.
"Hey stranger," never looking away
As I softly spoke,
"Are you as lonesome as well,"
As I swallowed down a choke.
I tore off a piece of jerky
And tossed it his way,
Never once did he spook
As he walked where it lay.
Cochise became much calmer
As the wolf came near,
I remained calm, to show
That I wouldn't show fear.
He came to lay down
By the fire to get warm,
There he layed
Never showing any harm.
The stars in the sky twinkled
As I layed down to sleep,
All was peaceful by the fire
There we layed to keep.
The sun rose from the horizon
A beautiful sunrise to see,
Waking to find the wolf
Was still with Cochise and me.
I made some coffee on the spit
And rounded up some grub,
Then I restoked the fire
With some dried up shrub.
It's as if we gained a new friend
Cochise and I knew,
As he gained our trust
Which is far and few.
I shoveled sand over the embers
And I rebridled Cochise,
Here amongst this campsite
Is where we made our peace.
I saddle up and look down
At our new found friend,
"You gonna come with us
On a trail that doesn't end?"
As Cochise and I
Slowly canter along,
I look behind us
Our new friend tags along.
We head out a trio now
Taking the dusty trails,
Another new venture
Of this lonesome riders tales.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 01/26/08 06:59 PM
drinker drinker drinker
Enjoyed this!

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sat 01/26/08 07:02 PM

drinker drinker drinker
Enjoyed this!

Thank you Susan...glad you did...sorry it was a bit long. But I just rambled today.

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 01/27/08 07:38 AM
Bumping...I thought more would enjoy this one.

songstress1's photo
Sun 01/27/08 11:56 AM
Wow honey I like this side of you!! I think this would make a great short story behind the poem...hint hint..flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 01/27/08 03:07 PM
A different side yes...and it probably would make a nice short story.

songstress1's photo
Sun 01/27/08 08:03 PM

A different side yes...and it probably would make a nice short story.
Yes it would soo......ITYS! lol ain't I mean...

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 01/27/08 08:09 PM


A different side yes...and it probably would make a nice short story.
Yes it would soo......ITYS! lol ain't I mean...

Not a mean bone in your body to me...loving ones yes.

wyatt1844's photo
Sun 01/27/08 08:14 PM
Quite enjoyed that, very well done.

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 01/27/08 08:19 PM

Quite enjoyed that, very well done.

Why thank you wyatt...glad you liked it.

songstress1's photo
Mon 01/28/08 06:34 AM


Quite enjoyed that, very well done.

Why thank you wyatt...glad you liked it.
ITYS!

LAMom's photo
Mon 01/28/08 08:21 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

Awesome,,, As the days and months go by,, I learn more about my Brother of Poem,,, Kind, loving and so giving,, Outstanding my brother,,, flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/28/08 08:42 AM
Hummmmmmmmmmmmmmm I must say my dear friend you have outdone your self. Now this one is truly a keeper not that they all are not but this one stands out by far would make a great western short story The Wandering Trio of the Plains just a thought. great writebigsmile

Noden's photo
Mon 01/28/08 04:44 PM
Great write, Robert will there you have another book, while I sit and wait....flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

songstress1's photo
Mon 01/28/08 05:33 PM

Hummmmmmmmmmmmmmm I must say my dear friend you have outdone your self. Now this one is truly a keeper not that they all are not but this one stands out by far would make a great western short story The Wandering Trio of the Plains just a thought. great writebigsmile
Great idea Kristi!!!

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 01/28/08 06:39 PM
A nice tale for sure and excellent write my friend. :smile:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Mon 01/28/08 06:50 PM
Thanks so much Denise....that is aww inspiring coming from you...love ya.

Kristi...that's a wonderful idea...thanks for the title....

Noden...I appreciate that...I believe I could work on it..it's been going through my mind.

Thanks Faded...glad you enjoyed it.