I really tried

We met on a sunny day
you spoke in such a way
to spark my interest in you
so what would you do?

We shared many fun times
couldv'e got rich if we had the dimes
for all time spent on the phone
neither feelin alone

It goes along
like a song
till that day
when you had to say
I love you
love me?

My world screeched to a halt
as if someone had thrown salt
why the hesitation?
it is the expected destination

There was something wrong
I couldn't find the song
I felt affection
caring and dedication

It goes along
like a song
till that day
when you had to say
I love you
love me?

Love, where was that love?
we fit together like a glove
It just isn't there
Not because you did not care

I cannot force it
I cannot keep it
We both cried
Just know...I really tried

bc 01/25/08

(((((((DRAGONESS))))))))

wow.............awesome poem

(((Dragoness)))

very, very nice!

WHAT A GREAT POEM

Thanks, snugs, flowers, msteddy, tsw, sexy, enya I am glad you all enjoyed it.

I cannot force it
I cannot keep it
We both cried
Just know...I really tried

Ohhhhhhhhhhh sweetie,,, Love is so strange at times....
Hugs to you

A very strange creature it is

you're an amazing writer.. i can't even express how great that was.. send me some of that talent why don't you? >=[

Very nice piece Dragoness

Great.

Slowly I find my personal favorites. Young lady, you are one. In fact, in my eyes, you seem a conglomerate of my faves: Denise, Kristi, Noden, and more..

keep it up
my young
Dragoness,
sweet, penetrating flames

jimmy

I can't find the words to say....kinda squeezes your heart like a vise. Ya touched something there.

Thank you deadpoet, twitch, lonely, jim and faded I am glad you enjoyed it. Your words are greatly appreciated.

Marvelous read

It would help if it would just be flippin logical.....or is it logical when its what "real"?

Just some thoughts rambling through my mind again,,, Hope you dont mind (((( dragoness ))))
Logical Love Hmmmmmmmmmmm lets ponder a bit
Brought up in conversation
Logical in one's mind
Quite the other in another
Real,,, A Fact,,, Permanent
Immovable,,, Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm ponder again
Logistics say Love shall come your way
Patience and trust
Brings on the Lustttttttttttt, ohhhhhhhhhh sorry
Love.......
In my Logistacal mind,,, My world
Love is a creature
Love is a word
Kindles ones soul
Mends ones heart
Love is within me
Love is within thy neighbor
Love is,,, Just is
I love you
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Easy said
yet at times hard to believe
Action shows Logic
Logic scares my mind
Hmmmmmmmmmmmm Love
In My Mind
In My Heart
In My Soul
In My Life
Love,,, simple, hard, yet so overwhelming
Takes my breathe away
Returns it
Love... Unconditional
Love,,, Me first
Love,,,, Born

Very wonderful thoughts there. And no I do not mind at all.