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Topic: More...Part Two
Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 01/20/08 09:24 PM
Here is part two some of you requested. It's not as good as part one, but it fits. More...Than You'll Ever Know (Part Two) More... Than you'll ever know Of places to go, More... Of turning your world For my favorite girl, More... Making love with you Turning you on too, More... Massages and treats Presents you seek, More... Ideas I can ponder Of here and yonder, More... Love I can show More... Than you'll ever know.

openheart45 Joined Sat 03/31/07 Posts: 724	Sun 01/20/08 09:27 PM
beautiful

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 01/20/08 09:28 PM
beautiful Thank you Mischa..I mean openheart...I appreciate that. Hope you read part one.

openheart45 Joined Sat 03/31/07 Posts: 724	Sun 01/20/08 09:29 PM
yes i did...

eileena9 Joined Fri 04/13/07 Posts: 28211	Sun 01/20/08 10:14 PM


TheCaptain Joined Wed 09/06/06 Posts: 44412	Sun 01/20/08 10:16 PM
Very cool.........

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sun 01/20/08 10:26 PM
Thank you so much John and Eileen. I am glad you two liked it. Maybe we could all give more to the ones we love.

songstress1 Joined Sun 11/18/07 Posts: 1244	Mon 01/21/08 05:56 AM
Oh My! What lies ahead for us is more than we can imagine. Love this part two ...ready to live it now.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/21/08 08:04 AM
Oh My! What lies ahead for us is more than we can imagine. Love this part two ...ready to live it now. I'm not only ready to live it but I am ready to give it.

songstress1 Joined Sun 11/18/07 Posts: 1244	Mon 01/21/08 08:07 AM
Oh My! What lies ahead for us is more than we can imagine. Love this part two ...ready to live it now. I'm not only ready to live it but I am ready to give it. Sounds intriging.. starting the truck now..meet me halfway.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/21/08 08:09 AM
Oh My! What lies ahead for us is more than we can imagine. Love this part two ...ready to live it now. I'm not only ready to live it but I am ready to give it. Sounds intriging.. starting the truck now..meet me halfway. I'm fixing to jump in the van....Meeting you half-way to join your heart for eternity.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 01/21/08 08:17 AM


Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/21/08 02:40 PM
Those are felt even from a long distance Denise..thank you so much.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 01/21/08 02:45 PM
like part one this too is speaks of longing and hope i know the time passes slow but, you do have an end in sight beautiful it will be

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/21/08 04:10 PM
like part one this too is speaks of longing and hope i know the time passes slow but, you do have an end in sight beautiful it will be Glad you liked both parts...it going by too slow..but it will all be worth in the end.

Maizy Joined Mon 01/14/08 Posts: 410	Mon 01/21/08 05:16 PM
Had to find part 1 and read it after I read this. It is really beautiful!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/21/08 05:17 PM
Had to find part 1 and read it after I read this. It is really beautiful! Thank you Maizy...glad you liked em both.

songstress1 Joined Sun 11/18/07 Posts: 1244	Mon 01/21/08 08:34 PM
like part one this too is speaks of longing and hope i know the time passes slow but, you do have an end in sight beautiful it will be Glad you liked both parts...it going by too slow..but it will all be worth in the end. TICK ........TOCK.....TOO LONG INBETWEEN TICKS AND TOCKS SEEMS LIKE AN ETERNITY PLUS ONE.

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 01/21/08 08:42 PM
like part one this too is speaks of longing and hope i know the time passes slow but, you do have an end in sight beautiful it will be Glad you liked both parts...it going by too slow..but it will all be worth in the end. TICK ........TOCK.....TOO LONG INBETWEEN TICKS AND TOCKS SEEMS LIKE AN ETERNITY PLUS ONE. But what's that you always tell me...that just brings us one more day closer.