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Edited by
justmenoel
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Thu 01/17/08 05:40 PM
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your love amazes me
it seeps from your core i can see it in your smile when i walk through the door your face lights up as you give me a kiss promise me something it will always be like this ive never known love that was so fullfilling and true i guess i never really experienced love but that was before you with you i feel whole nothing is missing at all i know youll be right there to catch me if i ever were to fall you love me with a tenderness that is gentle, but strong you accept me when i make mistakes and even when im wrong i dont know why you think i deserve the love you give but i want to thank you for doing so because now i know what it feels like to live so thank you for loving me with all of your heart thank you for loving me with a love that never will part |
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i like it
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you write that yourself? It is beautiful
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you write that yourself? It is beautiful yea..just wrote it==thanks |
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very very good!
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good job
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Lovely
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Very nice
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lucky guys get the beautiful women that write them poetry. Nice work Noel.
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Good job..
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all truth comes from the heart
not from the pen nor from the lips do you not hear my heart my love a silent song she sings with ease and grace and there can never be truer words |
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