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Topic: Have You Ever....
pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 01/16/08 06:16 PM
Have you ever wished upon a falling star And your dreams seemed close but yet so far Have you ever wished for that one true love That would come along sent from heaven above Have you ever cared for someone just their touch made you melt And you knew it would be like nothing you ever felt Have you ever given it your best,but your heart already knew You would never beat as one,but always be two Have you ever wondered why,two see things so differently And wished you both could simply just agree Have you ever had to let love go,because you knew in your heart As much as it may hurt you must be apart Have you ever felt the tears flow like rain When you care for someone who doesn't feel the same Have you ever just hoped and prayed That you both could just cherish the memories made

fastlinnie Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 1993	Wed 01/16/08 06:17 PM
GREAT

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 01/16/08 06:18 PM
good job

sexxyandsingle Joined Sun 01/13/08 Posts: 3283	Wed 01/16/08 06:21 PM
smokey burnouts

mry Joined Thu 08/23/07 Posts: 8401	Wed 01/16/08 06:21 PM
Hey Pam, how are ya?

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 01/16/08 06:21 PM
YEP... Good Write (((pkh)))

mry Joined Thu 08/23/07 Posts: 8401	Wed 01/16/08 06:23 PM
Beautiful Pam, just beautiful!

mry Joined Thu 08/23/07 Posts: 8401	Wed 01/16/08 06:23 PM
Beautiful Pam, just beautiful!

Zipper Joined Wed 11/21/07 Posts: 155	Wed 01/16/08 06:23 PM
Been through it. That was painfully beautiful. I still wish on a star. I still hope. I still know it would have been a mistake.

Zipper Joined Wed 11/21/07 Posts: 155	Wed 01/16/08 06:26 PM
You may want to get that published. I already copied and pasted it for my future reference.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 01/16/08 06:27 PM
I've felt this pain and searched for truth, just to feel I could use Dr. Ruth! Good poem and with deep thoughts. I wish nobody even had to try. HUGS to you and love will miss us, but never leave us.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 01/16/08 06:28 PM
good as always welcome back

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Wed 01/16/08 06:44 PM


frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Wed 01/16/08 06:50 PM
THAT'S THE BEAUTY OF LIFE IN DEEP PAM Have you ever wished upon a falling star And your dreams seemed close but yet so far Have you ever wished for that one true love That would come along sent from heaven above Have you ever cared for someone just their touch made you melt And you knew it would be like nothing you ever felt Have you ever given it your best,but your heart already knew You would never beat as one,but always be two Have you ever wondered why,two see things so differently And wished you both could simply just agree Have you ever had to let love go,because you knew in your heart As much as it may hurt you must be apart Have you ever felt the tears flow like rain When you care for someone who doesn't feel the same Have you ever just hoped and prayed That you both could just cherish the memories made

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 01/16/08 06:51 PM
thank you all for reading and it is so good to be back...hugs to you all

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Wed 01/16/08 06:52 PM
Sure have...lovely, Pam

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Wed 01/16/08 06:53 PM
GOOD TO CU BACK thank you all for reading and it is so good to be back...hugs to you all

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 01/16/08 07:23 PM
as always thanks Frank and Rhonda appreciate it.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 01/16/08 07:56 PM
Pam

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76461	Wed 01/16/08 08:02 PM
Awesome girl have messed you. and boy do I relate to this one great write girl