Topic: Complex Perfection
brwnkimba's photo
Tue 01/15/08 12:11 PM
Edited by brwnkimba on Tue 01/15/08 12:40 PM
Queen moved with attitude but that's all-right,
displaying the finest in visual perfection this night.
No way for any other in the vicinity to challenge,
she captivates the scene with an eloquent balance.
Cunning & sharp, the buisness since of a Don.
Unquestionable heart, in her hunt your the fawn.
Maneater, she'd defeat a flock of boys flick 'em like fleas.
Then pick one up and make him fly her and some friends
over seas.
Most at ease in a spa getting pampered, mud baths &
massage and no drama to hamper her.
Vamp when she wants to be treated unlike the others.
Giving lovers goose pimples, gitters & the st-st-stutters.
If she met my mother I'm quite sure she'd approve, woman to woman both fully still in their grooves.
To label her as merely beautiful really doesn't quite say enough. Some use this word so frivolously describing horses, cars and stupid stuff.
Humbled I'm awestruck feeling the angst of possible rejection
I'll call this woman Complex Perfection.






LAMom's photo
Tue 01/15/08 12:14 PM
WoW,,, So eloquent ,,, Beautifulflowerforyou :heart:
Left me feeling Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so warm inside

brwnkimba's photo
Tue 01/15/08 12:16 PM
Yes:heart:

LAMom's photo
Tue 01/15/08 12:20 PM
((((( brwn ))))

Perfection my friend,, is your heart and soul,,, Hugs to you,,,
flowerforyou flowerforyou :heart:

brwnkimba's photo
Tue 01/15/08 12:34 PM
Enchantedblushing

no photo
Tue 01/15/08 01:06 PM
In your Complex Perfection I am humbled my dear one:heart:

kc0003's photo
Tue 01/15/08 01:12 PM
excellent write

drinker

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 01/15/08 01:46 PM
Such wonderful imagery and a glimpse into the soul of a poet ... a beautiful read ... thank you... flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 01/15/08 02:06 PM
Awesome as all ways such insight to life and love.flowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Tue 01/15/08 02:19 PM
That poem is perfection..flowerforyou

brwnkimba's photo
Tue 01/15/08 11:25 PM
This is really an overwhelming reactionblushingI really thank all of you with my:heart:open.
Blessings To All